Comments | tenandi: The Family Man, Chapter 9

tenandi

Mar 12, 2012 01:50

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maebower March 12 2012, 05:56:56 UTC

Oh god, now my heart hurts!

kelkat9 March 12 2012, 12:43:50 UTC

Brilliant! You really captured the angst of that moment and the depth of their feelings. It was just so them.

fogsblue March 12 2012, 13:02:06 UTC

Oh, sweet and painful. Let's hope the Doctor learns from this.

Wonderfully written chapter.

miss_tina_lynn March 12 2012, 14:42:25 UTC

So sweet and wonderfully written :)

julesndairyland March 16 2012, 02:03:34 UTC

*meep*

so beautiful.