Coincidence Chapter 3

Apr 11, 2010 21:36

Yay! 3rd chapter!

Title: Coincidence Chap 3/?
Author: tellytelly 
Genre: friendship, romance
Rating: PG (for now at least)
Pairing: RyoJin/ Ryopi? characters from NEWS, KAT-TUN
Summary:   Pi can't get this person out from his head, and it turns out the person and his best friend are?

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fanfic, ryopi, ryo

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cipherstar April 11 2010, 14:23:26 UTC
*running across the room!!*
OMG i kyaaaa-ed too much while reading this :P
"Ryo reached out to pull Pi’s arm" ->> i seriously held my breath ^^

“I’m glad we got to meet again.”
“I thought you would have forgotten me”
->> ngeeeeeeee XDDD *beeaaammsss*
“… I couldn’t…” ->> kyaaaaaaaafufufufufufu~
"Did he say he couldn’t?...did he mean didn’t? ... " ->> Pi!! couldn't means couldn't and it is sooo not 'didn't' !

"..instinctively grabs an umbrella, rushes out the door and slams it behind him. " ->> i swear my heart stopped :P what happened? he searched for Pi??

and Jin! stay away from my..i mean Pi's Ryo! :P
thanks for the update!!! XDD soooo looking forward for the next one ^__^

p/s:sorry my comment's kinda long..

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tellytelly April 11 2010, 15:17:28 UTC
^^ no, i really love your long comments hee
i'm so happy it made you kyaa.. lol

the story is finally going somewhere i hope,
hope it's not dragging..
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yupyup , Ryo went out that door in the rain...
u'll see what happens next chapter.

pls look forward to it!!
and keep those long comments!

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cipherstar April 11 2010, 15:34:55 UTC
i can really be hyper easily when it involves Ryopi :P

hahaha..yup it's going somewhere together with a Pi who carries a major jealousy on his back..poor Pi..don't make him suffer too much okay? XDD

if Jin keeps on behaving like this, i'm gonna smack his head hard without thinking of any consequences :P hehe

huhu..now i really can't wait^^ *just ignore me :P*

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tellytelly April 11 2010, 15:48:09 UTC
the problem with Pi is that he's really troubled cos he's never really experienced this,
that's the Pi i'm trying to write here.
and he's those that are really loyal to frds, as it is in real life, so he gets more frustrated.

^^ i get hyper with Ryopi too ^^

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badbatazz April 11 2010, 14:41:34 UTC
Just found this fic. Read all and i like it. Pi is jealous... Baka Jin should just stick with jealous kame n make pi life more bearable. Shy ryo is a win

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tellytelly April 11 2010, 15:18:07 UTC
thx for commenting :)
pls read the rest ne!!!

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ringo_seijin April 11 2010, 16:21:53 UTC
jin referred ryo as his little friend.
i can't help but took it the literal way.
LOL....

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tellytelly April 11 2010, 16:23:58 UTC
AHHH!!
ooo...hahaa
sorry, it came out a bit ambiguous..kaka
i know u're a Pin fan !!

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ringo_seijin April 12 2010, 00:24:21 UTC
nah nah....
i mean, little as in literally little.
lol...
jin always says ryo is a midgit doesnt he?

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tellytelly April 12 2010, 11:52:20 UTC
haha!! o gosh, me and my dirty mind.

Ryo is little .
there's where the -chan goes lol >

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fancyann1974 April 11 2010, 16:25:46 UTC
So good...poor Pi is all mixed up...and Jin can someone please bop him in the head for playing with peoples feelings
Can't wait for your next update thank u

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tellytelly April 12 2010, 11:53:16 UTC
welcome :)

pi is pretty confused yup.. ^^

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decemberpie April 11 2010, 16:46:45 UTC
This chapter is (^3^)~♥

I'm in a hurry but I have to leave a comment! ^^''

Plz update soon. x3

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tellytelly April 12 2010, 11:53:43 UTC
thx for commenting even tho u're in a hurry :) !!

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