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tellshannon815

He Was Never Mine To Keep

Jun 30, 2010 22:27

Title: He Was Never Mine To Keep
Characters: Eloise, Charlotte, Daniel.
Rating: G
Warnings: Spoilers for The End
Pairings: implied Daniel/Charlotte
Summary: Written for lost_in_108 prompt #39: linger. When Daniel begins to remember, Charlotte and Eloise argue over Eloise's forcing Daniel to linger in the purgatory universe.

( Why are you forcing him to linger here? Let him go )

lost: eloise hawking, lost: charlotte lewis, lost: daniel faraday

Comments 5

valhalla37 July 2 2010, 16:19:37 UTC

This is so bittersweet -- that Eloise realizes either way she's bound to lose her son, and her coming to terms with the fact that (as Charlotte said) she's holding him back. Very nice!

tellshannon815 July 2 2010, 20:45:02 UTC

Thank you! I can well believe that such a thing would have happened, considering Eloise's reaction when she realised what Desmond was doing!

ozmissage July 3 2010, 03:16:55 UTC

I'm not much of an Eloise fan, but you made me feel for her here. Wonderful job! :)

tellshannon815 July 5 2010, 20:31:43 UTC

Thank you, glad you felt sympathy for her here!

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tellshannon815 July 4 2010, 18:55:45 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked this!