Bad Blood

May 01, 2010 18:02

Title: Bad Blood
Characters: Esau. Mentions of Jacob and Richard.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Spoilers for Ab Aeterno
Summary: For lost_in_108 prompt #31: force. As he smashes the wine bottle, Esau thinks Jacob is a fool to believe he can ever keep the force of evil contained.

Esau wonders how long it will take for Jacob to realise that there is evil inside him too )

lost: esau the smokey git

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valhalla37 May 3 2010, 18:49:10 UTC
Wow, this is so chilling, all of it, and I love Esau's voice here. The last section really gets me especially -- Bad blood will out; it’s in all the people Jacob continues to bring there. As he smashes the bottle, wine flowing freely, Esau wonders how long it will take for Jacob to realise that there is evil inside him too.

Just awesome!

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tellshannon815 May 3 2010, 22:25:39 UTC
Thank you! I'm looking forward to his episode, want to know more about him!

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tellshannon815 May 3 2010, 22:20:46 UTC
Yes, I'm interested to see what would happen if he did!

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ozmissage May 4 2010, 01:31:27 UTC
Ooh, this gave me goosebumps. Awesome fic.

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tellshannon815 May 5 2010, 22:24:13 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked!

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siluria May 6 2010, 18:46:27 UTC
Ooooh - I really like this!!! Love the comment about there being evil in Jacob too.

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tellshannon815 May 7 2010, 22:32:34 UTC
Much as I've gone right off Esau now, I still think there is evil in Jacob - guess we'll learn more next week eh? Glad you liked anyway.

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