The Man From DHARMA

Jul 07, 2008 23:49

Title: The Man From DHARMA
Fandom: Lost
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Ben, Richard, Ethan, Tom, Jacob, original characters Isaac Alpert and ex-Dharma member Philip.
Summary: How Ben became the leader of the Others, and his struggle to remain so.

The man from DHARMA )

lost: ethan rom, oc, lost: tom friendly, lost: richard alpert, lost: ben linus, lost: jacob

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tellshannon815 July 13 2008, 15:59:55 UTC
And thank you for reading! I really enjoyed writing this one, do you think we'll ever get to see exactly how Ben did become leader?
Was kind of strange actually because Isaac ended up becoming more of an arse as I wrote it than when I first had the idea in my head.

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wandaxmaximoff August 25 2008, 20:02:22 UTC
Hey!!

Another great fic from you. I really liked your take on how Ben became leader, and I agree, I hope we find out that information in the show.

Men... Ben is such a egomanical jerk at times... you gotta love him for that.

I would not be surprised if Ben really is the reason for the fertility problmes on the island, and that the true purpose of the purge was to get rid of him.

I loved your portayal of Richard in this story, and the inclusion of his father. It was also cool that Issac was the previous leader.

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tellshannon815 August 27 2008, 21:15:12 UTC
I knew you would appreciate the Richard fic!

I came up with this plot before 4x11 was shown and I did wonder afterwards whether the previous leader could actually have moved the island and that is why they are no longer leader...I prefer this idea though!

Did Isaac come off as a total tosser to you? I did worry afterwards that he seemed a bit that way, no one's given me bad feedback about him though. Was weird though, i deliberately gave him the name of Isaac because of the notion of sacrifice in the Bible (trying to think like the writers here) but at the time I had the idea, I hadn't known that Heroes Isaac was going to end up sacrificing himself. I wasn't copying that, seriously!

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wandaxmaximoff September 1 2008, 20:16:05 UTC


Hey again!

I knew you would appreciate the Richard
fic!

You know me, I'll
read anything with Richard in! ^_~

Actually, I'm
currently working on a story with him and Ben as the main characters.

I came up with this plot before 4x11 was
shown and I did wonder afterwards whether the previous leader could
actually have moved the island and that is why they are no longer
leader...I prefer this idea though!

Hum...
I suppose it is possible. Though, I agree, I liked your way better.
Plus, who is to say there hasn't been numerous leaders before Ben? I
strongly believe Widmore was an island leader once.

Did
Isaac come off as a total tosser to you? I did worry afterwards that
he seemed a bit that way, no one's given me bad feedback about him
though.

No, I thought he
seemed perfectly fine. I think his reactions towards Ben etc. were
natural for anyone in his position. Actually, in a way, he did remind
me of Ben. Just not quite so insane! *lol*

Was weird though, i deliberately gave him ( ... )

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tellshannon815 September 1 2008, 22:01:04 UTC
Well here's the icon again!
I have no space for any more icons right now and don't want to delete any, but would kind of like another Richard one!

Maybe I found myself in Ben's headspace when I wondered if Isaac was an arse? Scary thought!

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anonymous February 15 2011, 03:20:41 UTC
This was really interesting. I loved reading it

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