Do You Remember The First Time?

Jul 10, 2009 10:19

Title: Do You Remember The First Time?
Characters: Claire, Ana Lucia, Eko, Shannon, Miles, Juliet, Charlotte. Mentions of Christian, Yemi, Sayid, Pierre Chang, Daniel.
Pairings: very slight Shannon/Sayid, Charlotte/Daniel.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: spoilers up through S5
Summary: For gottalovev, who requested first times. The above characters reflect on the ( Read more... )

lost: eko, lost: claire littleton, lost: miles straume, lost: ana lucia cortez, lost: charlotte lewis, lost: juliet burke, lost: shannon rutherford

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valhalla37 July 10 2009, 14:21:19 UTC
Awww, I love how all these different realizations are so momentous for each of the characters, but in such strikingly different ways -- and for some, so tragic. Very nice insights into everyone -- I especially liked Juliet's ruminations, and obviously the Daniel/Charlotte interaction (and I'm so glad someone in fic's dealt with that; I thought it was so neat the way their relationship ended up being this cyclical thing).

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tellshannon815 July 11 2009, 14:06:19 UTC
I knew you would like that last one - think it's my favourite, I hope we do get to see more of them during the luau (it's still on my list of possible demands, watch this space!)

Glad you liked this one!

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gottalovev July 10 2009, 15:25:03 UTC
ohhh, thank you! I love the first times you chose, for so many characters! all significant moments for them, that would change everything. I was particularly touched by Juliet's many first and by Ana's (who I am sure is way more soft than they ever wanted to show us, using attitude like armor). and Miles, too. *loves miles*

thank you again!

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tellshannon815 July 11 2009, 14:07:50 UTC
I definitely think there was more to Ana than a lot of people realised. Glad you liked this - I loved writing the Juliet one!

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tellshannon815 July 11 2009, 14:05:00 UTC
I sometimes feel like the only person who writes the tailies - there was a question in a jam session over at thequillstation quite recently asking which characters people didn't write, and a lot of people seemed to name the tailies (I know what NOT to ask for on my queen day then!)

I agree re: Miles, there is something on my to-do list about his relationship with Pierre actually, so I hope now someone requests him. Glad you liked it - think Charlotte's was probably my favourite.

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violettehasagun July 10 2009, 16:48:59 UTC
Your fics are always so well thought out and in character. I really like this (and not just because the title has got a brilliant song stuck in my head).

I think the Ana Lucia section got to me the most, but the last line of Shannon's part was really touching. I never understood all the hatred for those two, and I'm glad you included them here. :-)

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tellshannon815 July 11 2009, 13:59:06 UTC
I never got all the hate there either. I think that people who hated Ana Lucia just didn't really understand her. Glad you liked this one!

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siluria July 10 2009, 22:30:34 UTC
You ran with some great first times here!! And I love how you ended them with a not-first-time for Charlotte! Excellent mix of characters too!

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tellshannon815 July 11 2009, 14:11:16 UTC
Thank you! Charlotte's was probably my favourite, glad you liked!

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