FIC: Collision: Chapter Ten (Lotrips/HP AU, Viggo/Lucius, NC-17)

[telesilla]

Collision: Chapter Ten
Authors: darkrosetiger and telesilla
Fandom/ Pairing: Harry Potter/Lotrips crossover; eventually Viggo/Lucius
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Viggo and Lucius finally have sex. Honestly guys, it's about damn time

Comments

[roadnotes]

Oh, this was very very nice, and feels completely in character.

[telesilla]

Thank you! And I'm really glad it seems in character, we're so far off the map here that I worry about that kind of thing.

[angiepen]

Very nicely done. :) It's good to see the boys finally noticing each other, and noticing that they're noticing, and doing something about it. And I like that once it was out in the open, they were very direct about it. It worked well for these characters, even Lucius; despite the fact that one would expect him to be subtle and sneaky to his dying breath, I bought that he was willing to be very direct there at the table and that his reasons for doing so were perfectly valid.

Angie

[telesilla]

Thank you! You give the best feedback. :)

And yes, I think there's a point where Lucius would realize that the time for subtlety is over and it's time to just be blunt and straightforward. *grins*

[nikkie222]

This chapter is for nikkie222, just because.

Thank you, and what a great chapter! That was well worth waiting for; the sex was a long time coming compared to most fics, but that is as it should be. It felt true to the characters; the build-up to the sex has been slow and deliberate and it felt natural. I love having Viggo insecure and worrying about measuring up when Lucius mentions magic and toys! :) I love these guys, and again, you and Nancy have created a wonderful series!

[telesilla]

Thank you! We were a little worried that the sex doesn't happen until a good three-quarters of the way into the fic, but doing it sooner simply didn't work with them. And while Viggo normally doesn't come across as a very insecure kind of guy, under the circumstances I think he would be, poor dear. *pets him*

Hopefully the next chapter won't take so long but I'm not gonna promise anything. *crosses fingers*

[stewardess]

I've been hoarding this story to read as a treat. Couldn't wait long, though!

I love many moments in this, but my favorite is Viggo going into photographer mode. He couldn't help himself with that much inspiration!

What impresses me the most about this series is how I understand the allusions even though I am not at all familiar with HP. I credit the both of you for that.

[widowedanthem]

Lovely.