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teerqesskq

Star-Crossed Ch. 5

Jun 01, 2011 23:06

Title: Star-CrossedAuthor: Me
Pairing: Leah/Bella
Rating: PG-13 (this chapter)
Warnings: None

Summary: After the death of her father, Leah couldn't figure out how anything could get worse, but it does. It seems that just when she's starting to understanding who she is, an event turns her whole life upside down. Nothing, she believes, is ever going ( Read more... )

leah/bella, bella swan, twilight, fic: star-crossed, leah clearwater, swanwater, femslash

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gabbie217 June 2 2011, 07:57:14 UTC

Just when I think I have this story figured out: BAM you throw anothern loop in the mix. As frustrating as it is, I love it. Haha.

I've said before how much I love this, so I really don't know what else to say. Oh! I'm really happy you updated. Even if it was slightly confusing towards the end, I loved this because it had sweet Leah/Bella interaction.

Fantastic job writing -as usual :]

<3

teerqesskq June 2 2011, 23:15:52 UTC

haha. Thank you though. How was it confusing? Maybe I can clear it up? :)

gabbie217 June 3 2011, 00:50:54 UTC

Why does Leah trust Victoria? Like, shouldn't she hate Victoria because Victoria wants to kill her imprint?

But I do agree with the comment below. Kind of. I prefer Rose/Leah over Victoria/Leah though.

teerqesskq June 3 2011, 05:03:50 UTC

Oh, Leah doesn't know. I was going to clear that up in the next chapter. So you should get all that cleared up. No worries :)

This Leah seems to have chemistry with other people too haha. I like Rose/Leah too.

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miluvrox June 2 2011, 17:09:31 UTC

YAY! Leah and Bella hanged out but the boys had to come and ruin their fun. And I absolutely love Victoria. I hope that Vic and leah become real friends and that Victoria doesn't die.

teerqesskq June 2 2011, 23:16:36 UTC

Thanks. I'll keep that in mind :D