Star-Crossed Ch. 5

[teerqesskq]

Title: Star-CrossedAuthor: Me 
Pairing: Leah/Bella 
Rating: PG-13 (this chapter) 
Warnings: None

Summary: After the death of her father, Leah couldn't figure out how anything could get worse, but it does. It seems that just when she's starting to understanding who she is, an event turns her whole life upside down.  Nothing, she believes, is ever going

Comments

[gabbie217]

Just when I think I have this story figured out: BAM you throw anothern loop in the mix. As frustrating as it is, I love it. Haha.

I've said before how much I love this, so I really don't know what else to say. Oh! I'm really happy you updated. Even if it was slightly confusing towards the end, I loved this because it had sweet Leah/Bella interaction.

Fantastic job writing -as usual :]

<3

[teerqesskq]

haha. Thank you though. How was it confusing? Maybe I can clear it up? :)

[gabbie217]

Why does Leah trust Victoria? Like, shouldn't she hate Victoria because Victoria wants to kill her imprint?

But I do agree with the comment below. Kind of. I prefer Rose/Leah over Victoria/Leah though.

[teerqesskq]

Oh, Leah doesn't know. I was going to clear that up in the next chapter. So you should get all that cleared up. No worries :)

This Leah seems to have chemistry with other people too haha. I like Rose/Leah too.

[gabbie217]

Oh! Haha okay.

Well, you know me-or maybe you don't.. Haha!- so patient that I'll do anything to know what the next chapter is. Even ask questions that come up in the next part.. :D

This Leah rocks. And I like this Bella too. Basically I loe this story and tour version of the characters. Could you just re write all of twilight or... Haha.

[teerqesskq]

haha. Yes. Very patient.

Thank you! Twilight's a big mess. I don't know if even I could fix it haha.