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Firefly Ficlet: Cooking Gone Wrong (1/1)

Apr 13, 2007 21:24

Title: Cooking Gone Wrong
Disclaimer: I don’t own Firefly. I just like to play with it.
Keywords: Mal, Kaylee, unintentional angst
Spoilers: Through the BDM
Word Count: 860
A/N: youngcurmudgeon prompted me with Mal, Kaylee and plotting evil cooking capers. This was supposed to be all funny and cracktastic. Instead it came out all… angsty. It could be because I’m ( Read more... )

firefly, kaylee, mal

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goldy_dollar April 17 2007, 02:21:50 UTC

Thank you! :)

I think the lovliness overcomes the angstyness.

Heh! I'll take your word on that! *G*

kaioa April 16 2007, 18:34:05 UTC

Protective older brother Mal for president!

goldy_dollar April 17 2007, 02:22:54 UTC

Heh! Yeah, Mal as president. That wouldn't *possibly* be disastrous at all. *G*

kaioa April 17 2007, 02:30:38 UTC

Well, on the bright side, everyone would be able to have their own way. Folks'll be able to do as they please, so long as they fall within bounds of human decency.

Actually, you're probably right. Disaster.

ceslas April 17 2007, 01:54:01 UTC

I like how you handled this actually...sweet without being totally gooey and fluffy. Kaylee trying to make it nice for Zoe is very in character and Mal getting mad at himself for not noticing his shiny mechanic struggling... Good job darlin'.

goldy_dollar April 17 2007, 02:29:54 UTC

Awww, thanks! I tried to make it all funny, but for some reason the idea of Kaylee having to trouble with her grief post-Miranda took hold and stuck. She's so intuitive and tries so hard not to be a burden for the crew. Plus, there was just something about the idea of her sitting at the galley table in the middle of a huge cooking mess that got to me. Heh.