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Fic: Our Last Night Before The World Ends

Jul 29, 2009 23:35

TITLE: Our Last Night Before The World Ends
AUTHOR: Erin Giles
RATING: NC-17 (Explicit Sex)
WORDS: 4500
CHARACTERS/PAIRINGS: Jack/Ianto
DISCLAIMER: Torchwood is property of the BBC.
SPOILERS: Contextual spoilers for CoE but it is set the night before Day One.
SUMMARY: Jack and Ianto spend the night together before all the Children of Earth stop and ( Read more... )

char: ianto, fandom: torchwood, char: jack, fic: our last night before the world end, janto

Comments 58

kelticbanshee July 29 2009, 23:43:27 UTC

*sigh* What can I say. I love to see them having some time for themselves. Peace before the storm. I love all the small details that you catch on, the tenderness and the heat between them, so nicely combined. And that last line... *sigh* If one good think came out of CoE, for me it is that I mentally slap myself when i catch myself thinking something like that: there is no better moment than now to tell those you care for, those you love. Or for a hug, a kiss and a cuddle. That line makes me... sad.

And since I have to live with that canon, I will add this to my own personal view of it. Peace before the storm indeed, but at least, they had some time together.

Hope that makes some sense... In short: I love it!

erin_giles July 30 2009, 16:15:22 UTC

Thank you so much. And I can never bring myself to write PWP for some reason it always has to have meaning. And that line at the end was supposed to be a kicker, because you always think there will be more time.

So glad you loved it, and it does make sense. :)

kelticbanshee July 30 2009, 19:25:17 UTC

I know the feeling, I can never do PWP either... to the extent that I'm writing whole plots so I can get a certain scene out the door LOL

axeslade July 30 2009, 19:17:26 UTC

And since I have to live with that canon, I will add this to my own personal view of it.

Ditto!

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luvinthe88and20 July 30 2009, 00:43:20 UTC

Lovely job

erin_giles July 30 2009, 16:15:53 UTC

Thank you. :)

pinkfairy727 July 30 2009, 10:52:47 UTC

Look for the bear necessities, the simple bear necessities...
My mind worries me at times :P

"Jack had no desire to mark Ianto...There was no question about whose bed Ianto would fall into at the end of a long day.
That section, my dear, plus the one under it about the look, is what got you your seat in the hall of fame.

Finally, Day Zero definitely works better and I had to use this icon.

*showers you with hearts and glitter and confetti for writing this brilliant fic*

erin_giles July 30 2009, 16:22:40 UTC

Again, I don't think they were thinking about condoms in the Jungle Book. :P

*sits proudly in the Hall of Fame* XD

Hehehe. Martha all excited, bless.

idamus July 30 2009, 16:44:19 UTC

*Sniffles* I hope they got something like that before the world went to Hell. Beautiful

erin_giles July 30 2009, 20:10:06 UTC

I like to think so. Glad you enjoyed the fic. :)

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erin_giles July 30 2009, 20:19:40 UTC

I think its employees wouldn't know what to do with themselves if they went on holiday. Well you never know, the BBC have shown some pretty risky stuff before. I think if Rhys hadn't been there with his beans we would have got what we wanted! ;)

Glad you enjoyed the fic.