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Wrong Number - Character Profile

Oct 19, 2009 00:22

Title: Wrong Number ( Read more... )

kim heechul, yoochun/junsu, choi siwon, kim junsu, dbsk, shim changmin, lee donghae, kim youngwoon, kim jaejoong, jung yunho, park yoochun, suju, yunho/jaejoong, wrong number, han geng

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jadyuu October 21 2009, 22:32:42 UTC

Nice characters ! (I thought : Man, if cops could all be so handsome -_-)
I just posted a coment on your chapter 2 and I wanted to see your character file^^ This pics are perfect !

I was wondering is Jajeoong is gonna stay this slutty all the fanfic ? XD Don't misunderstand me, I love Jaejoong like that XD it's just that strangely I feel like Yunho is feeling more for Jaejoong than simple lust. of course Jaejoong seems like we would choose sex over Yunho XD (and that's a part of the game, right ? ;) ) and it's just the beginning of the story (long or short story ?). When Yoochun got Jaejoong, Yunho nearly jumped out the van to save him, so I figured just a little about Yunho's feelings. Aaah, I love when fanfics are like action movie *o*

Sorry for this boring post ,but I wanted to support you ^^

I will be reading your fanfic ~

teal_wolf October 21 2009, 23:00:13 UTC

Thanks. I know, if cops were as hot as Chun and Su, I'd be getting myself arrested every day ( ... )

jadyuu October 22 2009, 00:28:23 UTC

oh yes, please, add me ! <3

I'm writing fanfics too (in french, not in english XD I'm totally not fluent XD) so I understand that coments are very importants and I'm always comenting fanfics that deserves it, like yours^^
Please, just don't abandon your fanfic, I'm always growing fond of good fanfics, checking every weeks if the story has been updated or not, and 50% of the authors, one day, decide to forget their story... Please don't do that >_<

Your plot seems really good and I'm happy that Jaejoong may settle down, I think that two things are really important in a story :
-1/ Action. in my opinion if the reader find a chapter boring, the author mind lost the reader. So, action it is !
-2/ Characters evolution, of course ^^.
Those two points are linked, because the characters's evolution can be done because of "actions", right ? If something important happen, it can change people mind definitly...

Ah, I like talking about your fanfic^^ Please, add me and I will add you back !

teal_wolf October 22 2009, 00:54:31 UTC

Cool, are you French, or just in a French speaking part of the world? (If you don't mind me asking.) I live in England, but I'm from an Irish family and never class myself as English, lol. Your English seems fine to me. If you ever did write English fics, you could just get a native English speaker to check it over (I would if you ever wanted me to ( ... )

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gacktprince2008 October 22 2009, 05:42:14 UTC

i love the cast :)