Fic: Something Important for wcpairings round 3

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Title: Something Important
Author: Turtlebaby_02
For: Sapphire2309 in the wcpairings fic exchange
Rating: Teen
Characters/Pairings: Peter/Neal, Peter/El
Spoilers/Warnings: None
Word Count: 1400
Summary: Somethings bothering Neal. And Peter's not as confused as he thinks he is.

AN: The outline to this had it so much fleshier. :( But RL got in the way. I hope you enjoy

Comments

[embroiderama]

This is lovely! It would be so difficult to balance everybody's needs in that situation, and you showed that well here.

[doctor_fangeek]

Awwwwwwwww.

I always want to leave more substantial feedback than, "I really liked this," but sometimes that means I tell myself I'll come back to it and then I don't, so I'm going to leave a comment now and just tell you that I really liked this. :-)

Okay, I'll say one other thing...I totally felt for Neal, missing Peter's casual touches and then losing part of his Tuesday on top of that. {{{{{Hugs Neal}}}}} And Peter's explanation as to why the touches stopped. Awww, boys!

[lauracollared]

Love love love this!
So sweet. Sulky and mad and drunk Neal. dawwwww. Baby!
And yay Peter making it better. <3
The ending :D

[hurinhouse]

so sweet. you nailed the emotion there with neal angry and hurt and sad. well done.

[ext_1385307]

Aww...so sweet.

Hugs the boys:)

Thank you :)