Comments | tbffj: Birthday Fic!: Not the When (The Who) [Neal/Sara] PG

tbffj

Sep 22, 2014 21:55

Title: Not the When (The Who)
Author: Turtlebaby_02Characters (Pairings): Neal/Sara (gasp! I know, right ( Read more... )

Comments 19

pipilj September 23 2014, 05:32:35 UTC

Aww poor Neal

turtlebaby_02 September 23 2014, 13:58:18 UTC

Right? I don't know why I always write him broken. lol

Thank you!

nywcgirl September 23 2014, 08:35:31 UTC

Cute story, and so true, have the same when I am in the States and the kids or DH want to speak with me.

turtlebaby_02 September 23 2014, 13:58:46 UTC

Thank you! Long distance is a bugger!

calis_1st September 23 2014, 09:24:42 UTC

This is so very lovely.

turtlebaby_02 September 23 2014, 13:59:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

ultracape September 23 2014, 11:10:38 UTC

This is heartbreaking.

turtlebaby_02 September 23 2014, 13:59:40 UTC

I think Neal, in general, is a little heartbreaking. <3

Thank you!

lov_pb September 23 2014, 11:44:33 UTC

Beautiful! You captured Neal's fear and lonliness. Would have loved to see this aspect of Peter's imprisonment ... highlighted on the show. Kudos.

turtlebaby_02 September 23 2014, 14:00:26 UTC

I know, the little bits they gave us weren't nearly enough to scratch the surface of emotion. *sigh*

I'm glad you liked it, thank you!