Birthday Fic!: Not the When (The Who) [Neal/Sara] PG

[tbffj]

Title: Not the When (The Who)
Author: Turtlebaby_02Characters (Pairings): Neal/Sara (gasp! I know, right

Comments

[sapphire2309]

dammit, i was going to squee all over you, but then you broke my heart. this is so good and the details, the charcoal, the timings of the phone calls, and the broken hearts all over the place and it hurts. But it's so awesome, turtle!!! can I call you turtle? And you wrote me N/S!!! :DDDDD THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHH!!! *tacklehugs you*

[turtlebaby_02]

You're very welcome! It wasn't nearly as painful as I feared! I know their voices are off (Sara doesn't cooperate with me...) but I'm glad you liked it anyway! Sorry about the hurt - this was supposed to be considerably more... peppy. And then, angst! Wheee!

Anyway, thank you! And Happy Birthday (again!)!

[sapphire2309]

No, it's spot on and really, really good!! And yes, angst! You know how I love angst :DDD

Thank you!!!

[palombaggia]

this is very beautiful. I agree that we should have seen more of what happened when Peter was in prison.

[scarym1]

Oh that is so moving!!! I love how wrote Neal & Sarah. : )

[sapphire2309]

OMG I was hunting for this and I didn't remember it being by you!!! I still love it so much, and I'm kinda writing a scene that's a little like this, so I wanted to make sure I wasn't stepping on any toes, but then I read this and it's all the FEEEELS all over again and ugh. I love them. I love you.

[sapphire2309]

lol, Well I am super happy that you still like it! Not going to step on any toes. ;)

:) <3

[turtlebaby_02]

And that's just me, creepily replying anonymously because lj picks fun times to decide that I'm logged out. :)

[sapphire2309]

LJ, man. *shakes head*

:D