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We Really Shouldn't Be Doing This (3/?)

Feb 05, 2011 20:23

Title: We Really Shouldn't Be Doing This (3/?)
Author: tazanya
Genre: Comedy-Romance with a bit of crack
Rating: R mostly for language and violence
Pairing: GD-Minzy-TOP, GD/CL, other YG family pairings
Author's Note: Minzy will NOT be involved in any sexytimes above PG-13.

DISCLAIMER: This is a work of fiction. Any similarity to actual events ( Read more... )

bigbang, gd, series, top, bom, dara, 2ne1, seungri, chaptered, minzy, cl

Comments 5

acornmama February 6 2011, 05:12:23 UTC

The chapter length is perfect. I like the longer chapters, more to read.
After a minute, the accounts are easy to figure out, and fun. The conversation was a lot of fun too. Maybe not as funny but definitely fun and actually the bit with TOP and Minzy is good because it isn't funny. It sort of means a little more, if that makes sense.
The explanations at the end help. Keep it up.
Thanks.

tazanya February 6 2011, 15:12:37 UTC

Great, thanks I was concerned about making chapters too long. I am glad the notes help out a bit.

Yeah the The text messages are the balance to the less than funny top-min moments.

messedrooms February 6 2011, 21:12:18 UTC

Wow, it's adorable. <3
And I don't think the chapter is too long. In fact its size is good. Your story is so funny, not boring. :)

tazanya February 7 2011, 05:09:27 UTC

much appreciated, I was worried about the length.

glad your liking it.

tammi_poo February 7 2011, 07:48:03 UTC

hahahah!! park sisters are sooo funny together!!! CL making googly eyes at GD eh eh?! ahahha. sooo cute!! my skydragon shipping heart is bursting with glee!!

aigoo..TOP is sooo possessive of her!! (which is kinda cute) but man..did he just blow it with maknae or what? she's ANGRY!!! poor maknae..she DOES like back!! wahhh!!