Glædig Jul, Chapter Two

[tasyfa]

Title: Glædig Jul (2 of 3)
Authors: tasyfa and looking_spiffy
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Billie Joe Armstrong/Lars Ulrich
Disclaimer: Purely fictional.
Summary: 'Motherfuckforhelvede I'm gonna do it.' Christmas time, mistletoe and wine - and lube, and barstools, and rice pudding… Billie and Lars are spending their first Christmas together as a couple, time divided

Comments

[hitchin]

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You know how after the last chapter I said that it was perfection?
As in, nothing could surpass its greatness...?

Well, fuck. What the bloody hell am I supposed to say now?

[tasyfa]

"Excuse me, I need a moment"? Hee. Thanks.

[tasyfa]

It *does* hit on a lot of levels, doesn't it Edna? Whirling is a good thing! :D

[pols_4_elijah]

GUH.
The ending there is just pure perfection. The whole piece has emotions flying at you from all ends and it really brings a joyful tear to one's eye!

I'm seriously in love with this series. You both write your characters so well and the mannerisms and behaviour is spot on. The descriptions here are amazing and this whole series is just...*sighs* No words describe its greatness.

Can't wait for the final part!!

xxxx

[tasyfa]

Thank you. It's definitely a bit of an emotional roller coaster!

[arzosah30]

What makes your rumpo bits all the more special is your explanation of the psychology of their actions...Not just Slot A into B but why - and how it feels.. It draws us in and makes us FEEL your story.

I honestly held my breath as I read most of this chappie this morning (got lots of weird looks on the train). Damn I wish I didn't blush so easily :P

Thank you both for this magic story.. This is possibly the best romance I've ever read..

[tasyfa]

Thanks. We both think the psychology is a lot more interesting than the physics. :D

[blue_midget]

That blushing smile might have been the most precious expression Billie had ever seen on his boyfriend's face. Even through the arousal singing through him - the pleasure building in his belly, spiralling higher with every minute, every thrust - he had the urge to shelter, to cherish and protect as well as ravage, and a gut-level understanding rose out of the realisation that this was what Lars felt when Billie let go - this was exactly what his lover felt. It choked his breath and made his heart stutter.

I loved the whole chapter, but this paragraph really stood out to me. It says so much about their relationship both with so few words. :)

[tasyfa]

It does, yeah; it's kind of a little epiphany happening there. Thanks.