We've got a lot of catching up to do

Nov 18, 2005 15:29

Midterms suck, is all I have to say. But I don't think I'm doing too badly for all that. Here's the first bit. I think this is the last part to this arc, although I can be persuaded to write an expansions of that last scene. Providing I'm asked nicely ( Read more... )

nanowrimo 2005, brother's keeper

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phoenixeiros November 19 2005, 03:17:08 UTC
OH MY GOD I LOVED THIS!!!!!! There were way to many parts of it that I loved, I kept on going, oh, I'll comment on that, no wait, I'll comment on that part. I really liked it. It was so hilarious!! I love the Isaac/Van interaction.

The line that made me laugh out loud was:

Isaac snickered. “It’s so romantic,” he said, batting his eyelashes exaggeratedly. “He saved her life, you enslaved him…”

“If I promise to go drinking with you later, will you stop talking now?”

Wee for evil doctors!!

And not so much on the cliffhanger. BAD CLIFFHANGER!! BAD!!!!

Write more!

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aestusargenteus November 20 2005, 07:27:21 UTC
Yeah, I second the write more motion! Write! Write!

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