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tashamiller2k

Fic: She Falls Apart - Eleven & Epilogue

Dec 16, 2009 20:50

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fic: she falls apart, pairing: demi/selena, type: multi-chapter, fandom: rpf - disney

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tashamiller2k December 16 2009, 08:22:18 UTC

Thank You!

And thanks for the quick comment!

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

caliali31 December 16 2009, 08:43:00 UTC

I love this fanfic so much!! You did an amazing job!!

tashamiller2k December 17 2009, 04:27:31 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you love it :D

let_me_stop December 16 2009, 12:16:54 UTC

This was really great. It's nice to know that Selena didn't let Demi fuck around with her. Bloody brilliant ending.

tashamiller2k December 17 2009, 04:28:09 UTC

Thanks, I like to think Selena is a very strong person and wouldn't let Demi get away with anything.

bridgeisburning December 16 2009, 14:24:37 UTC

i don't even have words. just absolutely amazing. you ended this just absolutlely perfectly - broke my heart & made me smile in the same moment. thank you so much for this story.

tashamiller2k December 17 2009, 04:29:24 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment.

you ended this just absolutlely perfectly
I'm so happy you felt this way, I spent a quite awhile worrying about how the end things so I'm really pleased it went over well.

bcrebel December 16 2009, 15:40:13 UTC

Pretty sure you couldn't have found a better way to end this. Walked a really fine line and came out the other side with something amazing. Enough hope in the ending to keep my fragile Lovez shipping heart from shattering into a million pieces but open ended enough, and with enough 'I really don't forgive you' that it's completely believable. I don't know if Demi can or should ever be forgiven, I like to think something like forgiveness is complicated enough that what Demi did wouldn't have to stay unforgivable. Forgiveness isn't earned, it's given. That said who knows if years of time and maturity could really ever be enough.

On a different note, I loved that you ended this with Miley and Taylor's wedding. It seems like a beautiful contrast to the rest of it, kind of a simple reminder that there still are happy endings.

This story was so good. I really can't wait to read whatever you decide to write next.

tashamiller2k December 17 2009, 04:32:09 UTC

Thanks for the lovely comment.

In writing the ending I knew there had to be some hope left but also that Demi couldn't be automatically forgiven.

I wanted there to be a happy ending for someone so naturally it ended up being Miley and Taylors wedding to round out the fic.:)