Fic: She Falls Apart - Eight

[tashamiller2k]

Comments

[emeralbade]

I love how Demi people are slowly seeing Demi go back to her old self. This was great and I can't wait for the next one. :)
P.S. After reading that last line I immediately thought of the worth the wait commercial Demi was in...I got to ask was that intential?

[tashamiller2k]

Totally unintentional! Which kind of makes it awesomely hilarious.

[kittyspotneko]

awww i love it!! i thought it was very cute and sweet please give me more fluffayness ^_^

[tashamiller2k]

Thanks, there will be some more fluffayness later.

[pathurr19]

I love the last line. I like it when Demi WAS aggressive then changes just for Sel. Damn that was some sweet romance. :)

[tashamiller2k]

Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[spashley20]

ugh this story is seriously like tearing my heart into pieces. idk what to think anymore. selena/demi are totally adorable and i'm so proud of demi for waiting, but it still doesn't excuse what she did!

ahh...amazing chapter.

[tashamiller2k]

Thanks :)

I sort of have the same conflict in writing it, because I'm writing this sweet wonderful Demi who's being a great girlfriend to Selena, and in some ways it's hard because of what she did.

[thefantasmickah]

I really enjoy your ability to weave in the character developments. From Selena being able to get back to her life, to Demi becoming her old self, but better, it all just flows nicely with each other and seems to follow a logical pattern. I really like this.

[tashamiller2k]

Thank you for your lovely comment!

I'm glad your enjoying the fic and it's nice to know i'm doing the character development right :)