Comments | tari_roo: Supply and Demand: Repeat Business Part 5/5 (SPN/Criminal Minds AU Crossover)

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Supply and Demand: Repeat Business Part 5/5 (SPN/Criminal Minds AU Crossover)

Nov 03, 2010 18:06

Supply and Demand: Repeat Business Part 5/5 (SPN/Criminal Minds AU Crossover)

Author: Tari_Roo

Rating: PG13 (Gen)

Fandom: SPN/Criminal Minds

Disclaimer: I own nothing, I profit from nothing. Although if I had my way Dean would grow his hair longer and Sam would cut his. Creative licence on historical accuracy and hand waving over actual facts. It’s an ( Read more... )

cm, fanfic, fic_spn, spn, fic_criminal_minds, crossover_fic

Comments 33

mrs_warwick November 3 2010, 19:41:20 UTC

I'm loving this - I was a bit dubious when I started to read the NCIS one, but I was hooked. I love the way you continued the story with the BAU.

I was hoping that the T&E guys would turn out to be Sam and Bobby, but that teaser does not look good for Dean. Can't wait to see where you go from here.

tari_roo November 3 2010, 20:07:39 UTC

Thanks for sticking with it - glad it kept your attention. And yes, more drama ahead for Dean. :) Thanks for the comment

jujuberry136 November 3 2010, 21:56:48 UTC

Very interesting ending! I think you did a good job showing how off Dean can appear to people without all the facts, but it's still so frustrating! I mean, we know and love the CM crew and just want them all to get with the program already. C'mon!

And very nice job keeping Rossi's ability to rationalize anything (very inline with his "I hate psychics" line).

I really loved Dean's outburst. It was great to see that T&E hasn't completely broken him, but heartbreaking to see how clearly he realizes the futility and horribleness of his situation (and that horribleness is only compounded by the realization that Sam thinks this is the better option for him. I'm thinking they'll be an epic fight if/when the two reunite).

I'm very curious with who stole Dean. At first I had thought it was the good guys from SGA, but reading the teaser I hope to god I'm completely wrong (because that'd be so cruel and something would have to be very wrong in the SGA 'verse).

tari_roo November 4 2010, 08:43:53 UTC

Ah, I love the epic brother fights :) and don't worry, the 'kidnappers' are OCs and the results of their actions will play out in the SGA verse

thanks again for the great feedback

calicomary November 3 2010, 23:18:47 UTC

noticed this a couple times. A king "reigns" over his kingdom. A cowboy "reins" in his emotions just like he would "rein" in his horse.
Your teaser is made of awesome. Can't wait.

tari_roo November 4 2010, 08:52:28 UTC

thanks for that. I will have to go back and double check. and that for the great comment!

khek November 4 2010, 01:18:06 UTC

Oh, dear. I thought the T&E guys that took Dean were Sam and Bobby, but it looks like that's not the case...

I just read the first story and through part three over the weekend. I was happy to see the final parts of story #2 this week!

I loved the NCIS story, and although I don't watch Criminal Minds as much as I do SPN and NCIS, it was just as enjoyable.

I can't wait to see where you're going with this! Any clues as to what show is next?

tari_roo November 4 2010, 09:00:55 UTC

Hey, the next story will be an SGA/SPN crossover. thanks for reading and commenting, really appreciated

maryjo24 November 4 2010, 03:34:35 UTC

Yay! 5 is posted!!

I think your tale is working very well, crossing with Criminal Minds is definitely a risky choice, given the profiling and psychological technicalities. But you've made it work and created an engrossing read.

Poor Dean, looks like he's out of the frying pan and into the fire...looking very forward to "Stolen"

tari_roo November 4 2010, 20:33:56 UTC

:) thank you! glad it worked and made sense - thanks again