[Fic] Indigo

[taralynden]

Disclaimer: I don't own Transformers, I just write about them :)

Title: Indigo
Universe: G1
Rating: K+

A/N: First attempt for the May ProwlxJazz LJ community challenge "On the outside looking in". I'll probably do at least one more, but this was the first bunny that bit :) See if you can guess who's talking before you get to the end.

Comments

[eerian_sadow]

nice take on the prompt, my dear. very sweet.

[taralynden]

Thanks ^_^

[logicaldisaster]

The whole time I was reading from after "I was there at Praxus, but that was not where it happened." I was going 'Primus? Well... no, probably not. Who else?' XD I got to the end and was like 'Dangit, I was right!'

Cute and well done!

[taralynden]

Yay for being right :D

Glad you enjoyed.

[anontfwriter]

Excellent prompt answer. I love the idea of them trying again in every 'verse under Primus's watch.

[taralynden]

Trying again and again until they can stay together - it's just a shame that in so many universes they get separated :(

[anontfwriter]

Thats what fanfic AU's are for. I have a tendency to 'fix-it' when I write, or ignore it.

[taralynden]

Me too. Most of the time ;)

[prowlsgirl]

I love it. ^__^

[taralynden]

Thanks! :D

[purajo]

This was really well done... it made me teary, so I'd say you accomplished it well. Primus wasn't my first choice till it got to the ending bit with Jazz's prayer. There was one point I thought it might be Teletran 1.

And nice link to TFA there.

[taralynden]

Teletran 1 would've been a good way to go! Didn't think of that. Hmm...

Sorry about the tears *offers tissues* but there's hope there. One day, they'll end up in a 'verse where one of them isn't about to die.