FIC--When You Figure Out You, Come Back to Me, chapter six by almond_joyz

Apr 20, 2009 22:19


For ithinkiamlost

Title: When You Figure Out You, Come Back to Me, chapter six
Pairings: Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione
Rating: PG
Words: 1749
Summary: Accrued vacation time, an injury, and two people who never really got over each other make for an interesting scenario.
Betas: queenb23more and lunalovepotter
Author Note: This is the end!! I hope that you liked this, ithinkiamlost , and I hope that it was what ( Read more... )

fic, :author: almond_joyz, fest:in motion

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jodytheclown April 21 2009, 06:20:32 UTC
Great chapter! Subtle or not, I loved the flirting. If the story is done, then I love how the ending ties everything together. Although, if it isn't finished yet, then I'm looking forward to seeing how they establish a relationship. Anyway, I really liked this chapter and story! Nice work! :D

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almond_joyz April 23 2009, 15:07:20 UTC
I'm not sure what I'm going to do with it. The last day and a half has left me emotional and disenchanted.

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jodytheclown April 23 2009, 16:12:23 UTC
Oh well whatever you decide to do, just know that there will be people who will be happy to see more of this story. I hope you feel better. :)

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flyingcarpet April 21 2009, 15:31:44 UTC
I was wondering how you were going to wrap this up in just one more chapter when I saw your author's note, since things seemed so open at the end of chapter five... but I think this is the perfect place to end! To me, this story has been the story of Harry and Ginny's reconciliation -- how they got from not speaking to a point where they were ready to begin a relationship again. Just like the title implies. And just as the title implies, you've left it at the perfect point, where Ginny has come back to Harry and he to her. Perfect!

I really love this story overall -- so glad you were inspired to share something longer with the comm for the exchange. :)

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almond_joyz April 21 2009, 15:49:45 UTC
Exactly!! If I went into everything, I think I would have been overwhelmed and it would have been a tedious story. There is more to this, obviously, but I don't think it would do the story justice.

Thank you taking into consideration what the title meant. They needed to be at the same place in order to figure out that what they needed was each other.

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sas33 April 21 2009, 18:12:17 UTC
I like how the ending is a new beginning.

However, I will look forward to the one-shots :)

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almond_joyz April 22 2009, 12:53:36 UTC
of course you are!!

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katwoman_68 April 21 2009, 23:08:25 UTC
I read this early this morning before work and I didn't respond right away because I wanted to take some time to think about it first.

My first response was "great chapter but where is the 'and they lived happily ever after.'"?

But I've had time to think about it and I realized you did leave us with she knows she's going to make an effort and he knows he's going to make an effort and they are finally talking and while they aren't comfortable with each other, they are talking. So maybe instead of an ending you've given us (and them) a new beginning.

So, it's definitely more really than 'and they lived happily ever after' and, really, that's enough.

:)

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almond_joyz April 22 2009, 12:53:09 UTC
Thank you. while I know I could have kept going for the ending that everyone wanted, I just couldn't do it. I wanted the ending to be hopeful and show that they're TRYING. Thanks for the thoughtful words

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quiet_discord April 22 2009, 00:45:40 UTC
So adorable! I loved it.

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almond_joyz April 22 2009, 12:51:18 UTC
Thanks!

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