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FIC--When You Figure Out You, Come Back to Me, chapter five by almond_joyz

Apr 17, 2009 20:32

For ithinkiamlost

Title: When You Figure Out You, Come Back to Me, chapter five
Pairings: Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione
Rating: PG13
Words: 2020
Summary: Accrued vacation time, an injury, and two people who never really got over each other make for an interesting scenario.
Betas: queenb23more and lunalovepotter

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fic, :author: almond_joyz, fest:in motion

Comments 25

katwoman_68 April 18 2009, 02:55:18 UTC

I've always enjoyed your stories on ff.net and I really like this one once I got over the 'eewww' factor of Harry having sex with Romilda Vane and Ginny being with Zacharias Smith!

But Harry did have Romilda arrested and hopefully the Quidditch League will fine and ban Smith for life.

I'm glad she's decided to 'fix' her and Harry. Can't wait for the next chapter.

almond_joyz April 18 2009, 13:35:15 UTC

thank you so much! The Zach part, to tell you the truth, hasn't really crossed my mind much in regards to the story. Maybe there will be an article or something. I just haven't figured that out yet.

danfan74 April 18 2009, 06:54:31 UTC

Glad she finally came to her senses. Want more.

almond_joyz April 18 2009, 13:35:45 UTC

well aren't you the impatient one...chapter six is in progress

birlan April 18 2009, 10:13:37 UTC

Like your story, dont like your Ginny so much. shes well done and engrossing but you are almost tempted to warn Harry off of her before she walks all over him again.

looking forward to what happens next.

almond_joyz April 18 2009, 13:37:23 UTC

that's okay...she's got a lot of soul searching to do and some growing up, too. There will be some resolution coming and explanation in the next chapter, I promise.

sas33 April 18 2009, 10:20:52 UTC

a lovely chapter. I'm glad Harry left that picture up - was it 'accidental on purpose' ;)

almond_joyz April 18 2009, 13:40:24 UTC

I think it was on purpose, since it was from a happy time in his life and he really needs to hold onto the happy bits of life.

mhersheybar April 18 2009, 13:07:01 UTC

I like watching Harry push Ginny to work harder - its obvious he cares about her as a person outside the other feelings. And the end where's she remembering the photograph is really sweet.

I don't understand his flirting with or awareness of the therapist though - what's the point? You set up a story where Harry's been a total workaholic for years and has no life. He finally gets a chance to be with Ginny again (when she's badly injured, no less), and he immediately starts flirting with a cute healer? It seems OOC to me. Just wondering.

almond_joyz April 18 2009, 13:41:37 UTC

There will be an explanation in the next chapter. This was, after all, from her POV so she doesn't know why he's doing it. I'm going to leave it at that for now.