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FIC: "Falling Slowly, Part One" by irislock

Apr 13, 2009 21:48

To: i_autumnheart

Title: Falling Slowly
Author: irislock
Pairing: Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione and other canon pairings
Rating: R
Word Count: 2950 (for this part)
Summary: The laws of motion wreak havoc in Ginny's life.

Author Notes: This is the first part of a five part story. Subsequent parts will be posted every day or two. Many, many thanks to pocketfullof, who was both ( Read more... )

fic, :author: irislock, fest:in motion

Comments 54

tosca1390 April 14 2009, 03:42:03 UTC

Oh geez. This is going to be amazing, I can tell. Lucky i_autumnheart!

The perspective of Ginny as someone without a memory is so clear and precise, and it's heartbreaking. I love the use of the full first names for all her brothers. That's such a nice touch.

irislock April 15 2009, 23:10:39 UTC

That has to be the best first review I've ever gotten. Thanks so much!

lollapulizer April 14 2009, 03:56:59 UTC

Oh this is really interesting! I can't wait to read more!

irislock April 15 2009, 23:11:27 UTC

Thanks!

lemaljumellen April 14 2009, 05:00:28 UTC

aw, this is heartbreaking! Every story I've read where Ginny looses her memory she always retains her attraction to Harry so this is a really interesting change. Very interesting, I can't wait to read the next parts! And I agree, the formality of calling her brothers by their given names is a very nice touch, really well done!

irislock April 15 2009, 23:13:20 UTC

Thank you so much! You know, I haven't ready any stories where Ginny loses her memory - lots of Harry amnesia!fic, but no Ginny. The early part is a little heavy on the heartbreak, but it will get better!

kezzabear April 14 2009, 06:10:26 UTC

I am indeed, intrigued :) (That's a good thing - it means I want to read more and if I can't I will try and breaks something ... which is sort of not a good thing ...)

I too like the change that she's not, in fact, attracted to Harry.

irislock April 15 2009, 23:13:52 UTC

In an effort to save your things, I will update as often as possible :)

hglove April 14 2009, 09:07:17 UTC

Oh wow! I'm already hooked. This seems very promising.
Reading this was hearbreaking and I can't even begin to imagine how Harry is feeling

irislock April 15 2009, 23:15:41 UTC

Thanks! Yes, poor Harry. I feel very badly for him, but it also gives him a chance to show some of his finer qualities.