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FIC: "Falling Slowly, Part One" by irislock

Apr 13, 2009 21:48

To: i_autumnheart

Title: Falling Slowly
Author: irislock
Pairing: Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione and other canon pairings
Rating: R
Word Count: 2950 (for this part)
Summary: The laws of motion wreak havoc in Ginny's life.

Author Notes: This is the first part of a five part story. Subsequent parts will be posted every day or two. Many, many thanks to pocketfullof, who was both ( Read more... )

fic, :author: irislock, fest:in motion

Comments 54

shocolate April 14 2009, 11:15:25 UTC

oh, awesomeness and sprinkles!

I love that she completely doesn't want him... not in a anti-ship way, just because we never saw in Ginny's head, so we need to see her get to know him...

*pets tall!Ron*

irislock April 15 2009, 23:17:02 UTC

Thank you! *loves sprinkles*

Yeah, I like the idea of them getting to know each other in a different context.

And tall!Ron loves to be petted :)

mollywheezy April 14 2009, 13:54:49 UTC

Wow. Such a wonderful beginning--I can't wait to read more. That's terrifying not to remember anything. It's heartbreaking that she calls her parents by their first names. I loved the description of Ginny's examining her body, and wondering what Harry had seen. Before her accident were Harry and Ginny engaged/ married? I notice no one told her what her last name was. ;) I love the line, "She hopes to god that this is all a mistake and she isn't really related to any of these people - they seem more like a group of circus freaks than a family." Great use of humor in the midst of tragedy. Excellent job! :)

irislock April 15 2009, 23:18:18 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you mentioned that line - it's one of my favorites, too.

danfan74 April 14 2009, 14:30:36 UTC

nice beginning. update quickly.

irislock April 16 2009, 02:39:48 UTC

Thanks!

flyingcarpet April 14 2009, 15:21:38 UTC

This is absolutely fantastic. Except there needs to be more of it!

RITE MOR PLS. KTHX.

Seriously, this is really intriguing and I love how you've set this up so that the reader knows only what Ginny knows. I'm left dying for her to learn more about herself, so that I can know!

irislock April 15 2009, 23:18:53 UTC

Aw, thanks!

*goes back to writing*

ginevrawp April 15 2009, 00:16:59 UTC

Just WOW. I'm completely speechless, or at least as speechless as I can get.
This seems so thought out and complex and real and wonderful. In a most desperate way.
I absolutely love this!

irislock April 16 2009, 02:40:42 UTC

Thank you very much (and I love your icon.)