Mary' Prayer

[takhen]

Taking a break from the series to add a poem for the Christmas Season.  You can find the Long Search, Zodiac, and Faces of Love series in my Memories.

Mary's Prayer

Comments

[jasonsnene]

Very nice sweetie. I think there's a typo in the first line though. Shouldn't 'her' read 'he'?

I loved how you worked the lines of the prayer into the end.

[takhen]

ACK!!! Gotta Fix that. Thanks. Glad you liked it.

[takhen]

Thanks. You caught on to the idea I was after.

[mysticsoblivion]

Very nice. I'm not exactly a religious woman so I hesitate to comment too much on these, but as always your words express powerful emotions beautifully. *g*

[takhen]

I don't consider myself as overly religious as well. This was to try and humanize what might have been felt. Thank you for the great comments.