The Warrior Elite- Chapter 11 part 1

[takelo14]

Title: The Warrior Elite 
Pairing: yunjae, yoosu (after chapter 1) 
Genre: Angst, Violence, SMUT
Length: (9/?) 
Rating: PG 13 
Warning: Violence, con-consent., Dark themes, Attmepted Suicide

Comments

[takelo14]

Spot for my dear daigensha-akuma <33333

[ouji]

GAAAAAHHHH!~ i was about to put one until my computer froze on me for a moment! xD it wanted to stop me! ;_____;

[ouji]

oh no this is not cheesy at all!~ if anything it's anticipation >:D i can see why you want to write this part so badly and omg! it's kyuhyun!!~ 8D (attempts to snatch him but he got away lol) but oh noes! jaejoong and the rest are going to go down with him?!?!?! ;A; though the demise of kangsoo would be utterly sweet! if he doesn't get away that is *___*

oh gawd it must be horrible typing it in the car for this length, which i would assume is looooooong D': i would get car sick for sure and i don't know how do you handle that @__@ but alas, you have typed this with your awesomeness! >:D (applause) can't wait to see how deadly kangsoo's death turns out :) and it's also good to know that yunho cares but he doesn't care enough to go to jaejoong! Q___Q looking forward to both of the outcomes my dear :)

[takelo14]

oooh im glad you dont think its cheesy XD
i feel bad for all the people i may have getting stuck in the mansion, but i gotta do what i gotta do :) i can have it be TOO unrealistic right??

yeah, actually i felt car sick at some point in the car ride, but i managed!!! *bows* thank u! i try to be good!

but yunho DOES care for jaejoong, but i think its just that he's not sure how much and in what way he cares for jae...

thanks for reading hun <33333333
im glad your looking forward to it!!!

[yunho_ism]

there's going to be an attack! :O
i guess it's good that there's another group that hates kangsoo but jae's still there and might not manage to escape!
yunho, stop being so in denial.
aish. i thought you were over that stage already!
thanks for the update.

[takelo14]

i know! i love action!
yah, im sorry for resurfacing the whole indenial problem... but it has to come out XDDD
thanks for reading bb <3333333

[takelo14]

LOL thanks uuuu! i like yunho in denial too XP (my guilty pleasure...)

thanks for reading bb <33333333
i'll try to update soon! ^^

[mistress_valo]

OH SHIT, OH SHIT, OH SHIT!!! YUNHO, U HAVE TO RESCUE JJ!!! AND KILL KANGSOO!!!

DBSK MARTINIS FOR YOU!!!

[takelo14]

LOL i love your reaction XDDDD
but i agree!! yunho has to rescue him!

thanks for reading and commenting bb <33333

[jae000]

Yun, don't lie to yourself :( Poor Jae T.T
And OMG they are gonna burn Kangsoo mansion!!
I hope it will only be the bastard that die :'(
Thx for the update^^

[takelo14]

seems like yunho is always in denial =_="
thanks for reading and commenting bb <333333333