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Jan 25, 2011 17:09

This has been a strange week, and it's only Tuesday ( Read more... )

fic:hetalia, working goes here, fic

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cienna January 25 2011, 19:15:14 UTC
It's the alleyway smut fic! It seems like forever since I read the beginning of this! I think I had almost forgotten about it. (Although really I could never forget about the beautiful alleyway smut!) And I have come to the conclusion that you really have an amazing Igirisu voice! You should definitely write more fics from his pov. So many hilarious and appropriate lines! And America was his usual self-confident and slightly manipulative self, that somehow also managed to come across as endearing.

Anyway, this was hilarious, scorchingly hot, and adorable! In short, I loved it. Best graduation present ever! ♥

Also, bubblegum lube FTW!!!!!!!!

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takadainmate January 25 2011, 22:33:32 UTC
I think it was forever since I started it. I've been adding a sentence or two to it occasionally for the past year, and then I just determined to finish the damn thing, and this happened.

The thing about Igirisu, I can talk like myself. XD

Glad you liked it though, and omedetou!

You know, I was thinking about writing more America/Igirisu and my first thought was, "Hm. I could quite logically do an RPS crossover with Clameron..." Disturbing.

You know you love that bubblegum lube. (yeck)

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ren_chan146 January 26 2011, 14:12:05 UTC
Yay, that was a pretty good story. I really liked it.
Escpecially that America was also drunk. Normally it's only England who gets drunk and lose control over himself. I like it that they are equal this time.
Thanks for sharing.^^

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takadainmate January 26 2011, 22:14:09 UTC
My pleasure! Glad you liked this.

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aria_dc_al_fine January 26 2011, 15:40:41 UTC
damn. it's effing hot. and fluffy too. and manry. i effing love this. your arthur's pov is brill!!

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takadainmate January 26 2011, 22:14:51 UTC
Heh. He's a lot of fun to write! Glad you liked this, thank you.

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fmptard January 26 2011, 16:22:01 UTC
dude! that was hot as fuck, top-quality USUK porn.
hell... top-quality fic in general.

nice job finishing it!

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takadainmate January 26 2011, 22:15:58 UTC
Hehe. I try my best. It lingered unfinished for so long I'm pleased to be able to share it. Glad you enjoyed this!

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nasty_show January 26 2011, 19:20:23 UTC
Oh yes, this is delicious! You built up to the smut really well, I enjoyed the flow of this story and the humour too XD

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takadainmate January 26 2011, 22:16:47 UTC
These two lend themselves so very well to humour! Glad you liked this. And I love your icon. ♥

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