These were wonderfully character-appropriate. Megumi's was right on, and Tsubame's had a well done feel of timidness to it which is so appropriate to her pov. I think my favorite pov here has to be Sanosuke's, though. It just felt so... so him. :) "But that was only if her life was on the line." Heheh - yeah, he wouldn't subject himself to it otherwise.
And I really loved the last line; very nice way to wrap up the piece, and again something I can totally see Tae thinking.
Thank you so much. Like I said, the reason I did these was to try to find the character's voice so I can finish my other RK piece. I really appreciate the feedback. Total love for it, and much appreciation for you.
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And I really loved the last line; very nice way to wrap up the piece, and again something I can totally see Tae thinking.
Thanks for sharing!
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Cheers,
Kel
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