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tachikhromatic

Poetry [ Text ] ( Private: Section Nine Members Only )

Dec 08, 2009 00:47

( Poetry )

!mister batou, poetry, !closed/private commline, i hope the major sees, apologies, talking to myself (again), things that end in tears, things that begin in failure, wow, !the major

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electroniccrane December 8 2009, 06:06:03 UTC

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[Congratulations, she's speechless.

She'll decide if she's pissed or grudgingly touched later.]

tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 06:10:56 UTC

[Peeeeer...Musashi sees your access ID, but you're not saying anything.]

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[Tachikoma are not good at this game.]

...Major?

[locked // unhackable] electroniccrane December 8 2009, 06:12:42 UTC

Your lock's inadequate.

[Fuck she almost had an emotion. That was close.]

[locked // unhackable] tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 06:14:27 UTC

Do you want me to make it more impregnable?

[Since it is about you an all.]

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electronichound December 8 2009, 06:14:13 UTC

I like it.

tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 06:15:11 UTC

I agree! My experiment turned out exceptionally well!

electronichound December 8 2009, 06:21:04 UTC

I thought the imagery was rather evocative.

tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 06:23:57 UTC

[fastidiously] I used a very large thesaurus.

After all, the subject matter demanded that the result be nothing less than perfect. Even though I'm not sure if she likes it or not, yet...

I did my very best!

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