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Poetry [ Text ] ( Private: Section Nine Members Only )

Dec 08, 2009 00:47

( Poetry )

!mister batou, poetry, !closed/private commline, i hope the major sees, apologies, talking to myself (again), things that end in tears, things that begin in failure, wow, !the major

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electronichound December 8 2009, 06:14:13 UTC

I like it.

tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 06:15:11 UTC

I agree! My experiment turned out exceptionally well!

electronichound December 8 2009, 06:21:04 UTC

I thought the imagery was rather evocative.

tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 06:23:57 UTC

[fastidiously] I used a very large thesaurus.

After all, the subject matter demanded that the result be nothing less than perfect. Even though I'm not sure if she likes it or not, yet...

I did my very best!

electronichound December 8 2009, 06:37:07 UTC

No work of art is ever pefected or finished, just abandoned.

[batou reads it over again.]

More than acceptable.

tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 06:41:27 UTC

Mmh...

[The enthusiasm of a moment ago is vanished: apparently the Major's opinion has been weighed in.]

I guess it doesn't matter, anyways. I'm glad you like it, Mister Batou.

electronichound December 8 2009, 06:42:29 UTC

[... it's weird to hear a tachikoma be anything but chipper.]

Hn.

[Locked to Musashi // Unhackable]

Did you really expect a heartfelt response from the shousa?

[ Locked to Mister Batou // Unhackable ] tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 06:47:14 UTC

I guess not. It was an exceptionally low percentage rating...

[ Locked to Musashi // Unhackable ] electronichound December 8 2009, 06:48:51 UTC

Gambler's Ruin.

[[OOC: Batou is referring to a mathematical concept here.]]

[ Locked to Mister Batou // Unhackable ] tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 06:53:11 UTC

Well, I'm not gonna apologize for it.

[Stubborn and chipper Musashi makes a triumphant return! You can practically hear it gesturing as if to mimic the gesture of a human crossing his arms.]

[ Locked to Musashi // Unhackable ] electronichound December 8 2009, 09:11:54 UTC

Did I say you should? I'm just saying don't put your faith in raw numbers. They aren't sufficient.

[ Locked to Mister Batou // Unhackable ] tachikhromatic December 8 2009, 17:10:04 UTC

[Silence. Awkward.

Eventually:]

Mister Batou...don't you think that's a little inappropriate?

[ Locked to Musashi // Unhackable ] electronichound December 8 2009, 21:49:01 UTC

Do you have a ghost?

[ Locked to Mister Batou // Unhackable ] tachikhromatic December 9 2009, 01:28:20 UTC

I don't know. Sometimes, I think I might. Once, I asked the Major, and she wasn't sure either, though in a previous instance she'd claimed we did. Is it possible to know for yourself whether or not you possess a ghost?

It seems to me that it's the kind of thing only other people can see in you.

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