Fic - The Effort of Being Okay 4 (complete)

[szm]

A/N: I did say this would be up on Monday because I didn't think I'd have time over the weekend. But it seems I do *g

Comments

[drinkingcocoa]

The laced fingers over the chest! I saw every inch of that scene you so elegantly choreographed. In character to the very muscles. That's right, Inspector; just go with it.

Thank you. So much. Especially for your characterizations. The difference between John's and Sherlock's eyes -- that says it right there. Thank you.

[szm]

Thank you very much for such a lovely comment. And thank you for reading this, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[burntcopper]

awww. however, this looks dangerously like a hanging end. with dangly bits of need-to-be-resolved plot. Like Sherlock's coping with John being with Lestrade when he needs someone to sound off on, or get him tea.

[szm]

This is the story of what happened while Sherlock was gone. What happens after he comes back is a different story...

[aeron_lanart]

You do realise that we need more OT3 goodness now, don't you? :)

I think I forgot to tell you how much I loved this bit...

“You fainted,” said Sherlock almost accusingly.

John just smiled. “Sorry, I’ll try not to do it again.” he replied. “You died.”

“Sorry,” said Sherlock smirking back at John. “I’ll try not to do it again.”

[szm]

More OT3 is always needed ;-)

*hugs you for all the beta work*

[aeron_lanart]

always a pleasure, even if I am somewhat distracted...

[witch_in_winter]

Good, good tale. Should be cannon. You did well with John and Greg healing each other. Would hope that you write more now with the three of them. The complexe dynamics could be fun to write about.

Thank you for this interesting and well done tale.

[szm]

Thank you very much for reading it.

There maybe a follow up to this, I just need to sort out some issues in my head.

[zauzat]

Very enjoyable story. I love the slow, real way in which their evolving friendship unfolds.

[szm]

Thank you very much