Comments | szaleniec1000: In This World and the Next Chapter 4

szaleniec1000

In This World and the Next Chapter 4

Oct 06, 2012 01:32

Is this a break from Hogwarts Exposed or vice versa? ITWATN is just that bad.

( Chapter 4 )

rutting deer symbolism, the pansexual '50s, everyone is evil, conflict be damned, yay stereotyping, ron is evil, pov!fail, reading the books is a good idea, harry is an idiot, sexism, badfic:in this world and the next, priorities be damned, the lowercase wizarding world, mary sue and gary stu, have i mentioned i hate this fic, hermione in name only, harry potter, double standard, idiot balls for everyone, dumbledore is evil, singularity of fail

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sickbritkid2 October 6 2012, 03:57:59 UTC

As I said, this really isn't much of a break from Hogwarts Exposed.

*pulls out a mixture of liquors and sodas for cocktails*

Name your poison, mate. I'm partial to an 80/20 Jack-and-Coke, myself...

sickbritkid2 October 6 2012, 04:30:29 UTC

Didn't see that mentioned in the bloody Prophet but then Ron's not the famous boy-who-married-at-eleven!"

It's always hilarious to see an author attempt to make a specific character or set of characters look bad, but then give them a line that has them pointing out the sheer ridiculousness of the situation.

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szaleniec1000 October 6 2012, 13:50:17 UTC

164,711 words (plus his other fics, which all seem to be along the same RTDE line) would be a very dedicated troll. Even My Immortal only weighed in a little over 20,000.

szaleniec1000 October 6 2012, 15:51:00 UTC

It's like the author's subconscious is itself rebelling against the story.

sickbritkid2 October 6 2012, 04:32:55 UTC

Re-read the first chapter of Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone. Assuming, that is, that you read it in the first place.

Something tells me that our intrepid idiot of an author thought that the first chapter "fucking sucked", much like how he hates every other part of the series that explains Dumbledore's action. Didn't you say that he hates Phoenix, Prince, and Hallows?

szaleniec1000 October 6 2012, 15:50:24 UTC

He does, and you only have to look at how he disregards the single most important aspect of Snape's character as revealed in those books for the sake of making him into a designated antagonist.

sickbritkid2 October 6 2012, 04:36:02 UTC

Actually, I'll rephrase that. Being in ITWATN means you have to be a complete idiot.

YOUR POINT IS INVALID! YOU DIDN'T USE AN APPROPRIATE COLON!!

- robst

sickbritkid2 October 6 2012, 04:37:31 UTC

Severus couldn't believe how they were all shitting themselves because Prince Potter threw a hissy fit. "The brat broke the rules and should be left to rot, Hogwarts should not be making exceptions for pampered Princes who turn up with a wife in tow. Let them stew, they'll come crawling back."

You know the Strawman has a point when he winds up basically embodying your own thoughts on this contrived shite of a situation.