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szaleniec1000

Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 5 part 2

Mar 04, 2012 01:14

And here we go again.

( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 5 )

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sickbritkid2 March 5 2012, 04:33:35 UTC

Anyone that touches you can see you as you are; Matt and Randy are our holders.

..."holders?"

That doesn't sound sexistly possessive. Nope, not at all...

sickbritkid2 March 5 2012, 04:34:49 UTC

Pumpkin Pasties are especially tasty

"Especially when you use them to cover your nipples!"

szaleniec1000 March 5 2012, 10:49:47 UTC

Well played. XD

sith_droideka March 5 2012, 20:13:23 UTC

Who bets that the first time Neil read HP that's what he thought the Pumpkin Pasties were for at first? I do.

szaleniec1000 March 5 2012, 21:22:18 UTC

But if he did know what it was, he's got even less excuse for that description of the outfit.

sickbritkid2 March 5 2012, 04:37:15 UTC

“I have three of her and two of Dad, but I can’t get a Ron Weasley to complete the covenant,” Caitlin complained.

Now, I know that the whole "Covenant of Three" shite is leftover from the fact that this is a Psychic Serpent sequel fic, but it was stupid then and it's stupid now.

sickbritkid2 March 5 2012, 06:09:17 UTC

“He was dating my mum at the time it happened. Both she and Harry were very supportive.

By "supportive", of course, they meant "completely shut him out of their lives and didn't even arse themselves to visit him when he was in Azkaban."

szaleniec1000 March 5 2012, 10:52:22 UTC

I don't know why Ron has even forgiven Harry and Hermione for abandoning him like that.

sickbritkid2 March 5 2012, 07:41:40 UTC

Neither Emily nor I have ever even asked them to try it.

Indeed.

Ever notice how this series fixates on female nudity and male nudity is basically mentioned in passing?

Nudists don’t push their lifestyle on others.”"Which is why we're forcing you to allow us to remain nude even though you'd already expressed your discomfort with the practice ( ... )

szaleniec1000 March 5 2012, 11:48:25 UTC

I'm actually not too fussed that we don't get ME3 until Friday, because I'm working tomorrow and Wednesday and I'm also getting a new processor. I hope the ending I've heard talk of isn't actually supposed to be the "good" ending, put it that way.

Ever notice how this series fixates on female nudity and male nudity is basically mentioned in passing?

Completely nonsexual!

sickbritkid2 March 5 2012, 13:56:30 UTC

We're getting it tomorrow. I'm still debating whether or not to attend the midnight release party where I've got the CE on reserve, because my long school days are on Tuesdays and those are generally the days where I can use all the sleep I can get the night before.

Still, it's a midnight release for my(hopefully continuing) favorite original IP of this generation.

At the same time, however, I continue to fear the possibility of, well, the leaked endings being the "best" endings for the game. If that's the case, then the prestige this series holds in my mind will plummet.

From what I've heard, it's almost as if the writers allowed Dietz to write the last 5% of the game...