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szaleniec1000

Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 22 part 1

Aug 14, 2011 18:44

In which all the conflict in their bonding as a family continues to be swept aside as if it was never there in the first place.
( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 22 )

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fly_buggy_fly August 14 2011, 18:14:44 UTC

How do breasts interlock?

...And the fact that that's the thing I'm most concerned about in this chapter troubles me :c

szaleniec1000 August 14 2011, 18:18:30 UTC

Especially given how ginormous they're supposed to be. I'm surprised they're even able to fit their arms around each other's upper torsos.

fly_buggy_fly August 14 2011, 18:21:22 UTC

As a well-endowed woman, I can honestly say that large breasts are NOT as wonderful as most authors think.

szaleniec1000 August 14 2011, 18:33:48 UTC

Especially as they spend half their time completely naked. Even if he couldn't be bothered getting personal accounts, basic physics should tell him it's not going to be as wonderful as he thinks.

sickbritkid2 August 14 2011, 20:26:35 UTC

"Hermione the ephebophile."

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kjQKeIgchYY&t=0m43s

sickbritkid2 August 14 2011, 20:28:42 UTC

"Then Caitlin crawled into bed with Emily and told her what they did at the orphanage when someone was sad and lonely. One girl would pretend to be the mother and hold the depressed child. Caitlin is mothering Emily."

Considering what we see happen in Too Exposed...

The Implications are becoming more Unfortunate by the chapter!

sickbritkid2 August 14 2011, 20:31:01 UTC

"I was wondering if you had room in your heart for an older brother and sister."

Considering what we see happen as this series wears on...

Guess Neil had an incest fetish, too...

sickbritkid2 August 14 2011, 20:33:52 UTC

"Ones that talk to each other about everything"

'Including sex, our nails, shopping, sex, boys, more sex, the lust for us to become a man, inappropriately intimate hyperempath massages, and sex! Y'know, what we OBVIOUSLY ALWAYS TALK ABOUT because we're GIRLS!!'

This fanfic series is so goddamn misogynist that even DUKE FUCKING NUKEM would say "Hey, man, that's just fuckin' sexist!"