Comments | szaleniec1000: Deserving Chapter 45

szaleniec1000

Deserving Chapter 45

Jan 18, 2011 02:34

On with the story.

( Deserving Chapter 45 (NSFW) )

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Comments 4

tenkai_kujaku January 18 2011, 17:54:45 UTC

Awww, Ferret face! That's actually quite adorable!^^ Doesn't take away the UGH factor of the fic though...
Thanks for the chapter, CANNOT wait for the next.

And as ever, your beer is on it's way :)

szaleniec1000 January 19 2011, 16:42:01 UTC

Seeing those strange concessions to canon is disconcerting. It's like the characters are saying "get me out of this fic!"

eaglevision1999 January 18 2011, 23:43:35 UTC

I always find sudden buttsex gross, because I can't help but worry what might be inside the butt in question. This is a problem in slash fics everywhere, but they normally don't mention bathroom related things in the same chapter. The conversation about the plug was...ew.
The positive thing about chapter 45 is that I learned a new word. I now know the word crestfallen and can pretend reading this is educating (thanx!).
I'm looking forward to chapter 48 in a twisted way...

szaleniec1000 January 19 2011, 16:40:34 UTC

It squicks me enough to see writers insisting on referring to someone's backside in terms of bathroom-related things in sex scenes. If you really want to write "Cloud Mows the Lawn Again", please please please give appropriate warnings. D: