Wonderful interlude! I'm glad Bones is getting some help with his Dael issues. I like Jim's section too, and the brief glimpse of Spock and Uhura's relationship.
I've been reading the whole Draw series these last days (weeks?) and I'm in love :)
Your characters and relationships feel so real, with weaknesses and strengths. Dael is a wonderful character and I like how you introduced her and let the love grow very gradually.
As I'm totally striving for realistic peeople, I'm super-glad that works for you ♥ and I know OCs are tricky and not always to everyone's liking, so I'm also happy that you like Dael.
Thanks so much for this feedback! You made my morning :))
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Your characters and relationships feel so real, with weaknesses and strengths. Dael is a wonderful character and I like how you introduced her and let the love grow very gradually.
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As I'm totally striving for realistic peeople, I'm super-glad that works for you ♥ and I know OCs are tricky and not always to everyone's liking, so I'm also happy that you like Dael.
Thanks so much for this feedback! You made my morning :))
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