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SPN/RPF Fanfic: Comin' Down the Mountain

Sep 03, 2012 23:00

Title: Comin' Down the Mountain
Rating: PG-13
Genre: RPF non-au/Gen
Word Count: ~3500
Disclaimer: None of this ever happened and hopefully never will.
Warnings: OPOV. References to violence that occurred in Number One Fan.
Spoilers: None here, but if you read the first story, there are spoilers for 7x23
Note: I did not plan to write a sequel to ( Read more... )

h/c bingo, angst, rpf, opov

Comments 21

Edition #2,323 livejournal September 4 2012, 03:39:18 UTC

User simplybeing referenced to your post from Edition #2,323 saying: [...] by (Jensen/Jared, NC-17) Comin' Down the Mountain [...]

borgmama1of5 September 4 2012, 04:52:46 UTC

Please get Jared all the way to help and on the road to recovery!

sylvia_locust September 4 2012, 12:31:54 UTC

Let's just assume everything works out! I have no idea where to go from here...

thisweshallsee September 4 2012, 06:47:51 UTC

Ooh, poor poor Jared but cool OC's. And very vivid imagery. Thanks for giving us a sequel! :-D

sylvia_locust September 4 2012, 12:33:48 UTC

Thanks! I'm happy the OCs worked for you, I wanted them to seem like real people.

magser September 4 2012, 09:09:11 UTC

Oh wow.....you cannot leave it there surely!
We need to know more now! Keep going!

sylvia_locust September 4 2012, 12:35:37 UTC

But...if I keep going I'd have to know medical stuff! Which I do not. At all

jenilees September 4 2012, 16:46:24 UTC

I went back and read the first story and then this. Wow!Really great stories. You have the perfect amount of details to set the scene without it dragging and enough of the characters thoughts for us to connect to them and really impact us emotionally. Nice balance between it all. Dru was creepy as hell, without being over the top and I loved Ben. His wishing he hadn't gone anywhere that morning so he wasn't involved, made him all the more human.
Nicely done!

sylvia_locust September 4 2012, 21:13:29 UTC

What wonderful compliments, thank you so much! I'm definitely glad it didn't drag. "Number One Fan" is the longest story I've written to date, and this was a lot of OPOV with very little Jared, so I was worried about that. I'm also glad you didn't find the villain over the top. And I...might identify with Ben's wish to stay the hell out of everyone else's crazy :) Luckily for Jared he stepped up. Hopefully I would do the same if the situation called for it.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.