Alphas Ficlet - My Desk is Not a Pumpkin Patch - Gary and Nina

[sylar]

Character: Gary and Nina
Genre: Gen
Author: thewatchmaker
Fandom: Alphas
Word count: 530
Rating: G
Prompt: Pumpkin for alphas_fic Halloween Ficathon
Notes: My first attempt at Gary. He's difficult.

Comments

[rodlox]

you captured Gary very well. good sense of his priorities.

one typo (unless its not)
>but I know what a pumpkin is supposed to smell right,
...but I know what a pumpkin is supposed to smell like,
...but I know when a pumpkin is supposed to smell right,

excellent fic.

[sylar]

Thanks and eeek! Thanks again.

[paynesgrey]

Loved Gary's voice in this. I'd say it was spot on. Well done!

[sylar]

Thanks tons. He scares me. LOL

[primus_sile]

Thanks for sharing this with us:) Your Gary seems very much in character, even if it's your first attempt in portraying him:)

[sylar]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked him.

[sabulum_p]

"My first attempt at Gary. He's difficult."

In more ways than one! Haha. (You've gotta love him, though. :P)

I agree, you did a great job in getting his "voice" right. And your fic made me laugh. :] My favorite line: "Someone came in my office and they put a fake pumpkin on my desk." You can just hear the indignation.

[sylar]

I love Gary, and I'm really happy that you liked his ficlet. Thank you.