Comments | swshawnee: The more we break, the more we feel alive

swshawnee

The more we break, the more we feel alive

Mar 23, 2011 16:37

Title: The More We Break, the More We Feel Alive - Drabbly oneshot
Pairing: Taeny
Rating: G
Genre: Angst / Comfort
Summary: Taeyeon and Tiffany have to start over against their will.
Wordcount: 1967
A/N: I'm not sure I know what this is about... And it's angst, for a change! I think I'm an angst-whore. And now I'm inflicting it on Taeny >: I'm sorry ( Read more... )

genre: angst, genre: comfort, rating: g, 2011, genre: au, genre: non-au, x: tiffany, length: oneshot, pairing: taeny, fandom: snsd, x: taeyeon

Comments 3

yongsowonhi October 29 2011, 15:09:30 UTC

Wow, this was nice. It's realistically portrayed and you wrote Taeyeon's POV nicely, and what caught my attention was funnily, the part where Taeyeon didn't wanna fall on the gravel and dirty herself. And later on, the part where she finally fell. It kind of parallels against her train of thoughts, if you get what I mean (you probably do if you wrote it that way intentionally). Haha I'm a sucker for parallelism. Thanks, I enjoyed this. (:

swshawnee July 4 2012, 21:02:21 UTC

Okay... awkwardly replying to your comment now I don't even know how many months after you wrote it, but I just have to say thank you for reading and commenting. Compliments like this makes my head all fhkshgkfsl-y and so I don't even know what to do with sweet people like you!

Thank you so much for reading (and *really* reading it) and for your wonderful comment ;~;

yongsowonhi July 4 2012, 22:03:31 UTC

LOLOL it's okay, your reply gave me a chance to re-read this! ;) And as with a second read it feels like I've learnt new things about it (or maybe it's just the many months LOL). Again though, I can imagine your writing so vividly + because TaeNy's popularity has surged x-fold since then, this is so possIble it's not even funny.. D:

You're welcome! (: