Comments | swshawnee: No More Hiding (2/2)

swshawnee

No More Hiding (2/2)

Dec 01, 2014 00:45

Comments 4

boundlessbliss December 1 2014, 01:46:15 UTC

I.. oh my god. I'm not even sure of what to say. It caught me off guard, I'm a mess of emotions right now, to be honest. I personally rarely engage in writing something that deals with serious matters, maybe because I'm too weak to make my characters suffer and because I don't really know how to describe handling difficult situations. I expected its content to be something similar to this, but I didn't expect it to hit me as hard as it did. The 'articles' at the end were a very nice touch, by the way, it added to the realistic feel quite a lot and it finished the story off perfectly ( ... )

Thank you fengxia2208 December 2 2014, 01:46:22 UTC

Thank you for writing this^^ It was extremely well written and I thought the premise was very well thought out.

vixxismydrug December 2 2014, 22:03:13 UTC

Oh my god I was worried that N wasn't gonna be in the group anymore at the end but I LOVED this. God, so many talented writers on this site, it's crazy.

elfiepike December 5 2014, 08:05:23 UTC

This was really engaging, and I think you handled both the "questioning" and "coming out" narratives quite well. I was biting my lip with the tension when N came out to the rest of VIXX, but trust Ken to take the scene back a step. Nicely done!