忘れないで (Don't Forget)

[swshawnee]

Title: Don't Forget
Pairing: Yunjae
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angst, romance, smut
Summary: It's Jaejoong and Yunho's last night together before the split.
Wordcount: 8,463

A/N: Okay, I think I might as well be honest. It's 2 a.m. and I've been writing this since about 9 p.m., which means my brain is absolutely fried. I'm not really satisfied with how

Comments

[snow_meow]

So sad and painful to read.

[swshawnee]

I'm sorry! I hope it wasn't all in a bad way though ^^ thanks for reading and commenting!

[shin_ah_mi]

i like the feeling of hope they kept at the end ^^
my poor yunjae

[swshawnee]

Keeping the faith is the most important thing ;>

[arashi_nana]

This hurt so much to read. I'll be back later to leave a better response.

[arashi_nana]

"I've wanted to be free," Jaejoong agreed, nodding, "but not from you."
I had to stop reading when I got to this line because it's something I've always believed. Jaejoong--JYJ--wanting to be free from the company but not from each other.

And he understood Jaejoong's need for freedom,
even though he didn't feel it himself. If things had been different, if they had been normal,
non-celebrities, they could have worked it out, Yunho thought, but not like this. No, they had chosen the
wrong lives, and Yunho knew that if they could choose, they would both trade their lives to be together.

But then again, if they had chosen different paths, they would never have met.It's so true. Had either of them not joined SME or made different life choices, they never would have met. They would've have become friends, bandmates and eventually lovers

[swshawnee]

Yeah, I think there's a quote from someplace of Jaejoong or Junsu, saying that their original plan was to leave SM, not DBSK? And god how I wish it could have happened that way instead... T_T

I'm sorry hear about your own relationship, I hope it somehow worked out okay in the end O: I mean, it never feels okay in the moment, but I hope it feels more okay nowadays..

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment, it's always nice when you know someone /really/ read ^^

[happy2992]

its sooooo beautifully written...but OMG is this the end....
i hate this..i hate this so much that it feel like a reality..a bitter relaity..
god how can you write it so realistically..
i'm in tears and i don't know what to feel right now....
...before i go fill more buckets...let me tell you...*thumbs up*
that was splendid..

[swshawnee]

;_; Thank you so much, I'm just really glad you liked it. And... I'm sorry I made you sad T_T Although I guess it's not really my fault (pokes at sm), this world is just really... mfsafmlae Dx I know how you feel.. Ah...

Read happier things in the future ;_; Thanks for reading /dries your tears

[riskit90]

I absolutely loved it .Extremely painful to read but you do write Jaejoong really good ..I'm expecting more spectacular YJ from you ^^

[swshawnee]

Ah, let me take a moment to pretend I'm not blushing like crazy over here! Thanks for all your kind words, ah, it really makes me so happy^^ I hope I won't disappoint! Thank you so much~