忘れないで (Don't Forget)

May 27, 2013 02:55


Title: Don't Forget
Pairing: Yunjae
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angst, romance, smut
Summary: It's Jaejoong and Yunho's last night together before the split.
Wordcount: 8,463

A/N: Okay, I think I might as well be honest. It's 2 a.m. and I've been writing this since about 9 p.m., which means my brain is absolutely fried. I'm not really satisfied with how ( Read more... )

genre: angst, pairing: yunjae, genre: comfort, genre: romance, genre: non-au, genre: smut, 2013, fandom: dbsk, rating: nc-17, length: oneshot, x: jaejoong, songfic, x: yunho

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flidi May 27 2013, 10:44:45 UTC
This is heartbreaking. I had to stop the reading many times, because I was crying.
I hope that you continue this story, because they may not end if they love each other so much. This contact not closed yet.

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swshawnee May 31 2013, 17:57:07 UTC
/hands handkerchief/ I'm sorry for making you cry! (though it kind of was my goal but ehem)

I did write something a whole bunch happier, a reunion type fic just now, which can be seen as a continuation (if one just wants to see it xD).. So in a sense I sort of did continue it ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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elle1501 May 27 2013, 13:10:51 UTC
My pillows wet.. With tears of course... Ah my yj... Maybe they separated this way eh....

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swshawnee May 31 2013, 17:57:50 UTC
Don't cry! <3 to you!

(who knows, maybe they did, but let's hope not ;_; thanks for commenting and reading at all)

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pinksparkles14 May 27 2013, 13:12:32 UTC
This is super sad! :(

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swshawnee May 31 2013, 17:58:30 UTC
Yunjae is the epitome of sadness I guess... D: Thanks for commenting!

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4everxd May 27 2013, 14:40:52 UTC
Oh my god this so sad yet so realistic! Amazing writing..god I wanna cry but I can't...;O;

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swshawnee May 31 2013, 17:58:48 UTC
Ahh, thank you so much /hides under table/ it means a lot to me that you say that ^^

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jlie_ly May 27 2013, 16:13:59 UTC
i like the way you write about their feelings, very spot on and realistic, it feels so very real. Gosh, i love your fics but everytime i read it's like a knife being twisted in my stomach. Hurts so much ; A ;

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swshawnee May 31 2013, 18:00:35 UTC
Ahh, hmm.. I guess I am sort of addicted to angsty fics... Oh, 'guess'? Who am I kidding D8 I can't function without them... But I'm really trying to work on some happier things, haha.

Thanks so much for all your kind words, you're really making me all kinds of happy, so thank you for commenting and for at all taking the time to read!

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