One Kiss

Apr 29, 2013 23:08


Title: One Kiss
Pairing: Yunjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Weird, romance
Summary: Yunho and Jaejoong take a walk through Yunho's subconscious.
Wordcount: 8,254

A/N: This... I think I have lots to say about this, but I'm really tired so this may come out a bit... strangely. This is a songfic of Jaejoong's "One Kiss", because once again I got a request on ( Read more... )

pairing: yunjae, genre: psychological, genre: romance, genre: au, genre: non-au, 2013, fandom: dbsk, genre: weird, length: oneshot, x: jaejoong, songfic, rating: pg-13, x: yunho

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nanjoko April 30 2013, 02:38:17 UTC
OMG im in tears TT this is sooo beautiful i dont have words to describe it, english is not my first language so please forgive me because i cant say all the things i would like to say to you, but this fic is perfect.

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swshawnee April 30 2013, 12:04:37 UTC
fshalfjas it's okay, you're so sweet and your comment means a lot to me anyway ;_; and your English seems great! Thank you, really, for even reading it at all ;~;

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jaan30 April 30 2013, 02:46:31 UTC
T.T gosh this is so sad! Yunho loves Jaejoong enough to die for him (or with him), but not to give up his dreams. Jaejoong loves Yunho unconditionally but he's too exhausted to continue climbing mountains and chasing Yunho's dream.

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swshawnee April 30 2013, 12:07:25 UTC
/stares at your pic/ fjsaklghsa

And that's right, yeah ._.' i'm kind of spazzing a little about your comment because ah, it's always nice to see someone really read it, you know? ^^ anyways I'm really glad it made you feel things(?) so thank you for reading and commenting! <3

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ext_1285835 April 30 2013, 02:50:24 UTC
Because of your AN, I think it everything REAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLL hard since the beginning of the story, thinking of what they might symbolise and all.

and I have to say, this piece is really beautiful.

It's kinda weird but not really that weird, still understandable :)

Thanks! ^^

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swshawnee April 30 2013, 12:08:25 UTC
Ah, I'm glad it was weird but not too weird! Haha, some weirdness is always good, no? ^^ And I'm also really glad you thought about it, I kind of worried nobody would understand a word I had written and be like "...ok?" all the way through, but yay^^

Thank you for your kind words and for reading at all!

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hyunnyb April 30 2013, 04:39:56 UTC
What an incredible journey, what amazing imagery and what a wonderful expression of their relationship. I want to send you a pat on the back, a hug around your neck, and three cheers for such a lovely work. Thanks for sharing it<3

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swshawnee April 30 2013, 12:09:40 UTC
adsjakldsjl xD let me love you!

Thanks a million, it really means so much to me. And thanks for the hug and pats and cheers and all, and also for taking the time to read at all^^ /hug back?/ I'm just really glad you liked it!

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dilovesyunjae April 30 2013, 11:48:32 UTC
You know, this just builds up from the beginning and then BAM! I cried...:(

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swshawnee April 30 2013, 12:10:07 UTC
Huw D: I hope it wasn't an aaaall bad crying? ^^

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

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