[Fanfiction - F!Amell/Alistair] No More Unhappy Endings - Pirates and Charts

[ashez2ashes]

Title: No more Unhappy Endings - Pirates and Charts
Rating: G
Pairing: F!Amell/Alistair
Summary: Kaylie Amell is a crazy person and annoys Duncan on the way to Ostagar.

A lot of us have done this.  You get all jazzed about making your own rewrite of the story and it fizzles out somewhere along the line.  However, I have wrote several snippets and I was

Comments

[jamzsquared]

“I’ll make a note of that.” He leaned in and whispered, “On my graph.”

I lol'd.

Seriously, I really enjoy the drabble, and I especially love your too-inquisitive, overly-curious Amell. I've thought a lot about what it must be like to be released into the big wide world for the first time ever, and the sheer volume of questions that a mage must have. Poor Duncan, being subjected to her prattling, but it's totally hilarious.

I can only imagine what the conversation between Alistair and Kaylie is going to sound like.

Oh, and I've also wondered why the hell Wardens don't ride horses or something. I mean, walking? All over Ferelden when there's a Blight going on and time is of the essence? I'm sure there have got to be horses around somewhere that they could buy/borrow/steal to make the job a little easier (although damn, I wish unicorns were around, lol).

[mythrienne]

Oh these were awesome! *still giggling* I love your dorky Amell, and hope you'll write more of her (and share)!