TDY
by Snow
Booth/Gunn
Ats/Bones crossover
R
for
spikendru's
BtVs/Ats Crossover Ficathonbeta by
lostakasha *luffs hard*
This is my life.
Its not what it was before.
All these feelings I’ve shared.
And these are my dreams
That I’d never lived before.
Somebody shake me,
Cause I ... I must be sleeping*
(
Thirty Day Leave )
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I keep reading this over and over and thinking that it could be a scrap from a pulp novella. Your Booth is so hard to watch and that's absoutely right because he *should* be.
Very nice that Gunn is the tender element here -- giving the only thing he's got to share. Snack cakes and wooden stakes. And Booth is so hollow and bereft he doesn't even ask.
Damn, you are good. Loved every word, as always.
*squishes you*
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;)
**adores you endlessly**
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:=D
And while you're at it, could ya mop the sweat from my brow? Because beta-ing for you is soooooooo harrrrddd....
*mwah*
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i don't even have words for this
gut wrenching and chilling and so so real and *maybe watches booth one day now cuz woah*
just .. once again you've left me pretty much speechless
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**hugs you super~tight**
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**hugshugshugshugs**
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Killer last line...no pun intended.
And it all feels so fluid just like Booth.
Even when he showered, he never felt clean. He wasn't sure he ever would again.
Great line. Perfectly dark.
The scene at the counter is brilliant, you can just hear the muted sound of it all, the terrifying silence of violence about to explode.
the shudder and twist and tremble
Do you know how much I love that you can write sex in all of about three words and still have it be so hot? A whole frickin' lot. :)
Like I said, Snow, gorgeous.
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Thank you so very much for such lovely feedback, Chlare. That means more than I can say.
Thank you.
*squishes you tight*
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thank you!
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Thank you so much! I've never written Gunn before, although I've wanted to, so this was an experiment for me. I'm so happy that it worked for you though.
Thank you for reading and commenting, Roxy!
*luffs*
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