You and Clouds

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Title: You and Clouds
Genre: Romance, Angst
Rating: G
Pairing: JaeMin
Length: One-Shot
Warning: Very light angst. And not happy ending. (why am I telling you this?!!)
Summary: So what's left? Clouds and the you I'll never be with.

You held my hand and made me laugh like no other friend ever did.

---Fast forward to two years later.

So at first, you

Comments

[whatifgirl86]

Aww that was depressing. Why did they stop being friends? Really enjoyed reading it though:D

[sweettap]

:P I forgot to add that! Hehe, thanks!

(in italics) A summer without you, no class with you...I forgot about you.

[sweettap]

hmm...thanks for reading!

[natipooh]

I think this would have been perfect without the last paragraph. The excessively cheerful tone at the end ruined the angsty mood a little bit.

I really liked it ♥

[sweettap]

Oh. Hehe :) I was actually trying to make the ending less angsty. True, that the effect would be better without the cheerful tone. Thanks for reading and helping!

[natipooh]

:-)

For the record, I've memmed this.

[jaceni]

Awe! I can't believe this is only a one-shot! I'd really like to know what happens in graduation and if either one of them attempted to talk for one last time before they truly never saw each other again. Thanks for writing it though. Really liked it, even if it depressed me. ^_^

Hopefully you'll do a sequel one day. :)

[sweettap]

:) Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you liked it.
I'll surely consider doing a sequel.

[sweettap]

Well, it's because of not seeing each other for a long time, and then one of them just forgot about the other's existence, basically. :( "A summer without you, no class with you...I forgot about you."

Sequel with min's pov?? :O :D I'll think about it! Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!