The Good Wife Summer Comment Fixathon

May 31, 2011 12:26


The ficathon is now closed! Thanks and slow claps to everyone who played, it's been awesome!


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variousflumps June 1 2011, 15:34:45 UTC
Alicia has eleventy-billion rules. She started with the obvious ones, like no sex in the stationery cupboard, no feeling her up in the corridor, and then progressed from there when she found out that the obvious rules didn’t actually rule out very much when you were trying to stop someone like Kalinda Sharma from getting you wet at work ( ... )

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lizook12 June 1 2011, 17:50:52 UTC
Love so much about this. The contrast of all the rules (the obvious versus ones that just seem a tad crazy) works especially well paired with Alicia's final thought about wanting to break so many of them.

No touching the inside of her wrist. (Kalinda looked at her like she was nuts when she made that rule, but it was just as necessary as the others…one finger, stroking, on the sweet spot of her wrist for 30 seconds in the conference room had led to a whole afternoon of fevered distraction.)
I think this was my favorite bit, there's something so powerful about such a slight touch being so meaningful.

Also, you captured Kalinda wonderfully here without even having a line of dialogue or thought from her-it was all from how Alicia sees her and it was perfect. Nice job!

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mssatellite June 1 2011, 17:59:05 UTC
Well written! I liked what you did with the rules.

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sweetjamielee June 1 2011, 19:55:28 UTC
EEEE. Okay I love this. I've been on SUCH an angsty K/A kick, but secretly (or not so secretly) I crave this... just THEM being sexy and teasing and happy and GUH. And obviously, OBVIOUSLY if Alicia ever truly allowed herself awareness of Kalinda as a sexual being, she would never be able to focus on anything ever again. Honestly, I don't really understand how ANYTHING ever gets done in that office with Miss Sharma around.

Also love Kalinda's wry "ooookay, girlfriend, no wrists, got it," then just moving onto the next thing that drives her nuts. Lish, Kalinda will stop turning you on when she CEASES TO EXIST. Then, and only then.:)

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threeguesses June 2 2011, 00:49:41 UTC
THIS FIC IS MY EVERYTHING.

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demoka June 2 2011, 10:53:46 UTC
*giggles* Oh, this. is. PERFECT! You fulfilled this prompt SOOOOO wonderfully!
Poor Kalinda, if she got banned from eyesex as well, I think she may very well go on a rampage! XP
Perfect ending! *squees about*
Thanks for sharing!

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demoka June 2 2011, 13:19:24 UTC
BTW, eleventy-billion?! XPPPPP I can believe that!

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