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Where the Lines begin to Blur - 1

Jul 08, 2008 20:17

Title: Where the Lines begin to Blur
Part: 1/?
Chapter Links: Links to all the Chapters
Author: tia_maria_616 & sweetchild85
Pairing: Ville/Bam
Rating: PG - NC-17, depending on the chapter

Summary: A troublemaker and a teacher with a past meet outside of lessons for some private tutoring, but it soon becomes apparent that their subject is changing from maths to chemistry ( Read more... )

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Comments 36

jezebel1386 July 8 2008, 19:34:31 UTC

Student-teacher Vam is awesome!

The fact that the relationship is illegal *and* taboo makes it 10x hotter than normal.

Six lines more and I would have been totally addicted. Since those six lines were not there, I'm going to have to have more to completely make up my mind.

tia_maria_616 July 8 2008, 20:29:36 UTC

You think this wasn't long enough, fiance? Greedy ;P

I'm glad you liked it, and they're hardly doing anything yet, I assure you. ;)
Maybe your six lines will come in the future, if you're lucky!

sweetchild85 July 8 2008, 20:39:47 UTC

good to know that someone likes the illegal relationship, hahaa... and you'll get some more lines if you'll be patient =P

lillithvalo July 8 2008, 20:03:12 UTC

OH YES!! I LIKE!!
Very good.
the flirting between them was funny.
I can't wait for more

sweetchild85 July 8 2008, 20:34:16 UTC

glad to hear that ;)

there is lots more you just have to wait.

meduusje July 8 2008, 20:13:17 UTC

this was adorable and funny and witty and sweet!
can't wait for more!!!

sweetchild85 July 8 2008, 20:35:17 UTC

thanks =)
there will be more once we get all the editing done.

ctrnicu July 8 2008, 20:31:21 UTC

Oh this is so interesting. I loved that it was longer than most posts, please keep writing, can't wait to see what happens on their date.

sweetchild85 July 8 2008, 20:38:30 UTC

I am not a fan of stories which chapters are only like 5 sentences long, I like it long ;)

We keep on writing and we're already lots of pages ahead so it shouldn't take too long for you to find out about their date.

lyricsof_poison July 8 2008, 20:53:36 UTC

shiiit, good vam! i can't remember the last time there was good vam out there!!! yayy!!!! i love you for this =P
more soon!!!!

sweetchild85 July 8 2008, 20:55:35 UTC

awww... thanks, sweety, that's really good to hear and I love you for this comment =)

lyricsof_poison July 8 2008, 21:00:03 UTC

....that icon is insane
i love it xD